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SquarePeg3D - Broken Bundle ch.2

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Posted:2016-10-12 19:01
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Language:English  
File Size:30.20 MiB
Length:182 pages
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Average: 4.53

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Posted on 13 October 2016, 04:00 by:   krim1    PM
Score +17
Yes! More of this, PLEASE!
Posted on 13 October 2016, 06:51 by:   Solipsist    PM
Score +37
The art is phenomenal, but, how to put this, the pacing of the panels? The content within each page? It's complete shite.
You can spend 3 pages just on watching a character fall down to the ground, or say 3 words. There's very little, tiny content within each passing page, and it makes you flip the page faster than you actually bother reading or looking at anything, and it's a shame.
I thought that issue of "pacing" only existed within amateurish 3D h.comics, but apparently, if we take the level of competent scene-composition and overall badass capabilities of the author, this work cannot be taken as amateurish. So, what, is that how 3D content always is? 3D is really bloody weird this way. There's either way too much fucking text, to the point you're reading an info-dump of a drama, or there's too little text.

Meh, I don't know. This was fun, but like most 3D works, it could've been better.
P.S: I wanted to add, that I love how the cocks ended up looking. They feel so palpable, so meaty. That's something that shouldn't be taken for granted.

@Square
While what you say is true, my issue stems from the apparent fact, that most, if not all, 3D h.comics, center each page around one or two shots, in contrast with doujins, which grant you like 7 different shots to go through in a single page. The issue here, is how condensed a single page is, not how good the artist is. Catch my drift?
I feel like this work would've been better if it was animated, it sure feels like you tried to make it feel that way. But, again, my issue is that I don't have a lot to look at with every single page, it's not very condensed, and it feels like it's a problem pretty much every single 3D work I had have ever seen shares.

TLDR: I basically get the feeling that 3D works stretch themselves thin, by expanding the number of pages they have, instead of condensing the panels together. I don't read a whole lot of 3D works, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. I did enjoy going through this one, but I always get that itching feeling that it could've been more than that.
Last edited on 13 October 2016, 20:18.
Posted on 13 October 2016, 11:49 by:   thetaker    PM
Score +41
Why...Why did the Minotaur have to be there!? :(
Posted on 13 October 2016, 14:24 by:   SquarePeg3D    PM
Score +115
@Solipsist - though I appreciate the criticisms I must admit I'm confused...most 3D work I see is just the same pose rendered from 5 different angles. Change pose, five angles. Wash, rinse, repeat until you've popped out 60 pages with only 12 poses. Also, a good lot of them have no story whatsoever and throw the very concept of pacing to the wolves. If everyone just wants the same pose rendered from 5 different angles I can easily just do that...God knows it would make my job SO much easier, especially if it's just gonna end up for free anyway.

@thetaker - Because his agent called me and basically begged me to include him. He was living behind a dumpster at Arby's and really needed work. Call me a bleeding heart! =
Posted on 13 October 2016, 18:51 by:   z4cko    PM
Score +22
Huh, well, gonna just balance the scales here and throw in my vote of confidence.

Loved this! Great work SP3D!

Had no problems with the paneling personally, and actually enjoyed it all. The pacing of the story, the quality of the 3D work. Lovely stuff. Keep it up!
Posted on 13 October 2016, 22:25 by:   kazutoyo    PM
Score +27
This is probably the best 3D work I've read here. Usually not that fond of them, but this was great. Poses and expressions were all nice and natural and didn't give that amateur-ish feel that seem to be so common, at least in my experience.

Only drawback is that there's no chapter 3 out yet, argh :p
Posted on 14 October 2016, 01:06 by:   dhimascpw    PM
Score +7
with all of this squarepeg3d comic, i cant find foxy boxing.
anyone know where to read it?
Posted on 29 October 2016, 15:03 by:   Tai Fu    PM
Score +4
I admire your work for example the minotaur well stocked but the chapter thus ending the Minotaur is dead, they can not invent a 2 chapter where you want to save the Minotaur and his soul one comes get back into his body and he his sexual pleasure continued leads. many wish that the Minotaur in the 2 chapter of his life gets back
Last edited on 29 October 2016, 16:12.
Posted on 15 December 2016, 10:16 by:   rootgnawa    PM
Score +10
Not my thing sexually, but the story is so engaging that I need chapter three, soon!
Posted on 14 January 2017, 09:45 by:   kashiri    PM
Score +19
i agree cant wait for Ch 3
Posted on 23 June 2017, 16:03 by:   642847851    PM
Score +9
I need ch3 XD

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