Moderators. Please delete this gallery. I've added another version which improves upon a lot of things, making this one obsolete.

These have not been mirrored, you have to read from the right towards the left.

I also apologize for the typesetting, as many points out. The original text was really small in the Nippon-go and with it its chat bubbles. I sometimes had to chose between having really small text or moving out from the chat bubbles, which again had to make me chose between covering up more of the images or moving into "strange space". I generally tried to not cover up the important parts of the images, thus the result. The original text actually was so small that I had to enlarge it 4 times in photoshop to read it at times, and seeing as this was the first time I upload anything here I was really afraid to make it unreadable (I was down in text size 8 at times, which for many is hard enough). I'm not trying to make excuses, but the newbie element really shows here. As for the cleaning the full-color makes some of the white stand out. My original plan was to blur it out and keep the original text. However, as I started to "move into strange places", this would cause me to having to blur out parts of the images instead, or make it look even weirder. In general it being full color would make it even more noticeable. Looking back I should probably just have gone for pure black here, rather than color coded on the person, as that would allowed me to write smaller.

In general I just wanted to have this translated for other's who have no clue as for what is going on, as I really enjoyed the original art and there is no "new game" translations out there (which surprises me, I'm normally not one to translate). Considering I just finished the anime season, I also figured my motivation for "making it really smooth" would go away fast if I just left it there, so I wanted to bring it out fast once I finished the translation bit. As such there are some minor Japanese traces of old text remaining, which I actually didn't see until I uploaded it. The reason for this was that some of it hid under my translation text. Then I moved the text later in the final adjustment from the 1x view, and it made it hard to spot it (it looked like dust, lol, I need to clean my screen), though it became VERY visible once you're back to 4x on this page. I apologize for that, it was a rookie mistake made in haste. I could probably fix much of this through editing if I'm allowed to reupload it, and I'll do this today.

Still, I hope this gives this some added value to some, even though my amateur parts could have been better.

Kind regards.

Last edited on 30 September 2016, 21:52.

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Thanks for this one. Nice full color work. Purple hair is the best! Good internal view of the finish on p.10. Good work on the translation.

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What the fuck is this shit?

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The cleaning, the typesetting, the pain

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Worst typesetting/editing I've ever seen in my life. 1 star.

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I am tempted to give this 5 star only because there is Aoba-chan in it

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i want to cry.

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Only thing that was good was the cover...

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If there is any moderators out there, feel free to delete this. I'll reupload a version which improves upon everything in 30 min or so.

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