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[Luraiokun] Hybrid Test (Zootopia) (ongoing)

Western
Posted:2016-09-23 14:00
Parent:None
Visible:No (Replaced)
Language:English  
File Size:4.91 MiB
Length:23 pages
Favorited:181 times
Rating:
124
Average: 4.68
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Posted on 23 September 2016, 14:00 by:   Metalslayer    PM
Uploader Comment
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/luraiokun/
Posted on 23 September 2016, 14:18 by:   raven186    PM
Score +39
as an office clerk i genuinely laughed at the part where the artist used the tipp-ex.

And by the way, i kinda like this comic, Judy looks really good, shes got that "fluff" that only very advanced artist can bring on

on the other hand Nick looks like a drug addict and yes i know he just woke up
Posted on 23 September 2016, 14:24 by:   SSSdriver    PM
Score +26
Why the downvotes though, the art is very nicely done. I guess the score will improve later on...
Posted on 23 September 2016, 14:50 by:   raven186    PM
Score +14
SSSdriver, second that
Posted on 23 September 2016, 16:17 by:   Blake81    PM
Score +26
This one's damn good. However, while the art and story quality are superb, the pages themselves could use a bit of a polish in some areas (that could probably explain the downvotes).

First of all, the light is all over the place; it's kinda hard to figure if a scene is bright or dark because it's meant to be or because the scanner misbehaved. It also looks blurry on some places (like the upper left bubble on page 5), and on page 10, you can clearly see the corrective tape that was used on the two lower bubbles.

Other than that, it's damn good. I can't wait how the rest of the story will come out.
Posted on 23 September 2016, 17:30 by:   Drioss    PM
Score +22
Damn dude, your art skills are really good, i cant wait for the rest
Posted on 23 September 2016, 19:52 by:   Kerrus    PM
Score +25
Probably getting some downvotes due to the pages not being scanned, but honestly the art's solid enough that it doesn't really matter much.
Posted on 24 September 2016, 22:11 by:   Crash_7    PM
Score +19
According to the artist's furaffinity page, the pc he uses for digital stuff is down. Thus the primitively scanned pages. Still, his artwork is excellent, and the story is off to a good start. And at least this time, it's not all emojii's for the dialog. :)
Posted on 30 September 2016, 04:34 by:   sky666dragon    PM
Score +6
Art is good, story is good, but need to fix the light when scanning (also some images were made on white paper and others are a little more yellow?)

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