Finally after a very hard work I could finish this final chapter. I hope you enjoy.

@madscissor I agree completely with page 2

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Thanks honoha. I have no problem with porn or classic hentai stories but I really hate when something that must be femdom is always ending in porn and sex.

I wanted to say to all people who read my stories my opinion about that, and I decided do it by making a preview story before the main one.

maybe my stories are not the best femdom stories but at least I don´t lie to my readers, I make femdom, and I know there are people who dont like my stories and I don´t wanna they waste time of your life reading stories that they don´t want to. that is the reason I made this previous story for explaining the content I work.

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ever thought of having someone edit the english so it is more coherent? But good job on finishing your work!

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yes my english is not so good for dialogues, If I still have the same problems and I can´t improve the language, my next comics will be in spanish I guess. about someone who edit my dialogues, yes I have thought that, but it´s difficult cause it has to be somebody who can speak spanish and has the enough time cause this is hard work.

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Yay! Happyend!

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i hate happy endings its so anti femdom. was good til he stopped being abused.. would have been nice to make her big sister misunderstand aswell that he was a masochist and made his brother become a fart cushion

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and I hate cliches. and even more, I would hate if any of my stories be alike other ones and got predictable endings. Maybe I could make some cliches stories in future but when I decide to make a good story, at least for me, I wanna try different things.

in this saga I made: facesitting, scissors, neckbreak, farting, urination, trampling, victory poses, school girl pin, shoulder ride, ballbusting. there must not be so many femdom stories so complete like my stories. most of femdom stories are facesitting, scat or women masturbating a dick with their feet. and it´s very difficul can see 2 or 3 generes in one story. and do you know what is really anti femdom? I´ll tell you, anti femdom is making a manga, doujinshi or any story cataloged as femdom and then you see is pure porn and it only has 1 facesitting vignette and the rest is a guy fucking a girl, that is anti femdom. I work different genres even the ones I don´t like, and I won´t let anybody tell my stories are anti femdom.

sorry if you didn´t like the end, but I won´t change my style to script stories. even if I have defects, I´m very proud of my work. cheers

probably mike the mad and his friend chizuru will be the next main characters of my next work. I am thinking to make a saga of 3 or 4 chapters too.

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Finally got around to reading this. Nice chapter, it feels like a great conclusion to the series. It also reminds me a little of "Kainushi-sama to Oyobi!" by Tokimachi Eisei, which is sadly still untranslated. Two things I'd like to mention: 1: It's "Shut up" not "Share up". 2. You don't need to worry so much about what people say. Everyone enjoys stuff differently, so people who post criticism of your work are just expressing themselves, they're not attacking you personally or expecting a response from you. Thanks for sharing this interesting and fun story.

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Thanks. I was writting share up so much, my bad. normally I accept critics and I try to see everything in a positive way. but I´m human and some comments can pissed me off, for example the comment that said my story was anti femdom, and after working a lot for making a saga that contains so many femdom content I can´t accept that opinion. I know my stories won´t be liked by everybody, furthermore my last comic has a very bad qualification but at least I think nobody can deny that my comics are femdom. I dont wanna make femdom only for femdom, also I wanna tell an story, even though sometimes I make some stupid femdom stories like the last one of Mike the Mad or Unagi Power. thanks for the correction. cheers

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