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[gemu555] Imouto Birthday - Sister's Birthday (COMIC Anthurium 023 2015-03) [English] [TripleSevenScans]

[gemu555] いもうとバースディ♥ (COMIC アンスリウム 023 2015年3月号) [英訳]

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Posted:2016-09-04 09:42
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Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:27.60 MiB
Length:22 pages
Favorited:1142 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.54

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Posted on 04 September 2016, 09:42 by:   CEDR777    PM
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Posted on 04 September 2016, 11:05 by:   Hakrei    PM
Score +73
Gemu555's works features some of the best slightly plump curved girls ever....
Thanks for sharing!
Posted on 04 September 2016, 11:05 by:   RRViper    PM
Score +332
"I want you for my birthday present,"

Seriously, how many guys are going to say no to that?
Posted on 04 September 2016, 13:39 by:   ZeBolt    PM
Score +13
Yep, that's happTening...

p. 6, slight typo ;)
Posted on 04 September 2016, 14:21 by:   p187    PM
Score +58
"You're pussy is mine!"
Posted on 04 September 2016, 14:35 by:   The Last Jedi Master    PM
Score +39
Been a while since there was a decent incest work translated. This one`s definitely it.
Posted on 04 September 2016, 16:03 by:   Noreally    PM
Score +45
>That first page
;_;

Good thing it worked out for her in the end.
Posted on 04 September 2016, 16:39 by:   sparker119    PM
Score +31
I read "poor grammar," then I immediately though, of course she's a little girl, don't expect perfect grammar.
Posted on 04 September 2016, 16:39 by:   eloise ailv    PM
Score +10
not bad not bad
Posted on 04 September 2016, 16:39 by:   Darktaka    PM
Score +27
Great imouto.
Posted on 04 September 2016, 17:36 by:   XxShagrathxX    PM
Score +14
thanks bro :D ;D; gracias muy bueno xd
Posted on 04 September 2016, 20:29 by:   Naruto0116    PM
Score +29
Let's be honest. First page, she was a sweet innocent girl. Next page, we all thought she went Gold digger on us.
Posted on 05 September 2016, 00:57 by:   Xerodusk    PM
Score +129
Page 2, last box: "Rukika" should be "Rurika"
Page 4: "For this years present, I wan't you onii-chan." There should be a comma after "you," and that apostrophe totally got transferred to a weird part of the sentence (should be "year's" and "want").
Page 5: "What's this? A lovers quarrel?" Should be an apostrophe at the very end, after the 's', on "lovers."
Page 6: "To be honest, I somewhat expected this would happten." Extra 't', yo.
Page 7: "I love you onii-chan." There should be a comma after "you."
Same page: "I'll take it upon myself... of accomplishing that role." This line makes no sense at all and needs to be completely rewritten. Sure, the two parts of the sentence are separated into separate boxes, and there's nothing wrong with either half if they were combined with other halves that actually fit with them, but when you proofread (did you proofread?) you kinda need to read them as one and make sure it isn't just plain dumb. Because that's just dumb.
Page 9: "Never though my sister was that kind of woman." "I never thought my sister was that kind of woman."
Page 11: "You were so cure, Rurika." Is she a former Precure, or what? (note: if it wasn't obvious, this was the point where I really started getting annoyed)
Page 14: "Jeez, how absurd can you be!" Either add a question mark or reword that so it's not a question.
Page 15, first 2 bubbles: Same as above.
Page 17: "You're pussy is mine!" "Your pussy is mine!"
Page 18: "Your huge breasts, pussy and your ass!" You should either add another "your" before "pussy" or remove the one before "ass."
Same page, next to last bubble: Okay, I don't care if you use "come" or "cum" (actually, I do kinda prefer "come," because "cum" is just plain stupid, but that's become really popular, so I let it slide these days), but at least pick one and be consistent.
Page 20: "That was the greatest present, ever." That comma shouldn't be there.
Same page: "I'll see to it that I live up to fulfill it." What?
By the way, why did they keep talking about how they're "comming?" Is that some new shorthand for "communicating" that kids are using these days?

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Anyway, that's just the really obvious stuff. That's leaving out all the instances of grammar that is wrong yet some idiots really do talk like that sometimes, so I didn't count them. That's also ignoring all the parts where no flesh and blood human being would ever actually construct a sentence that way, even if it may technically not be incorrect per se. I'd be here all night if I tried to throw all of those in.
Posted on 09 September 2016, 15:51 by:   Anklaf    PM
Score +15
page 4. those eyes of realisation XD
Posted on 09 September 2016, 18:00 by:   Ilyia    PM
Score +24
It was better when she still had her underwear on. Once she removed her clothes the art ended up looking sloppy.
Posted on 26 September 2016, 12:02 by:   orezz    PM
Score +16
JESUS CHRIST THOSE HIPS

Like, I don't usually get envies of the physical attributes of the ladies I see in this shit(disclaimer: I am a lady), but fuuuuuuuuuuck.

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