Mating season for wives [English] [Rewrite] [Ωcomatose]

[若月] 発情期妻 (COMIC 彩蛇 2015年7月号 Vol.1)

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.Comatose.

Posted:	2016-08-28 06:29
Parent:	None
Visible:	Yes
Language:	English RW
File Size:	22.56 MiB
Length:	20 pages
Favorited:	325 times

Rating:		215
Average: 1.86

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Posted on 28 August 2016, 06:29 by: .Comatose.

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another manga i did rewrite couple of weeks ago
hope you enjoy and again feel free to comment negative
and positive insights about it,thank you! :D

Posted on 28 August 2016, 08:05 by: Tripfriend1

For what purpose?

Posted on 28 August 2016, 08:33 by: jonniecage

is there an English version

Posted on 28 August 2016, 09:46 by: zen_zen

There's so much negativity against rewrites but when it's done properly, I think it merits a read with an open mind. This rewrite is pretty good, the only real criticism I have is the too often repeated "Fuck" in the dialogue. I understand that it's being used as sound effects but the non-sensical ooohhs and aaahhs seem more appropriate. If the title didn't say Rewrite on it, I would have accepted this as a direct translation - the script fits well with the artwork.

Posted on 28 August 2016, 10:00 by: Okeo

Please, don't use my translations for this creepy shit!

Posted on 28 August 2016, 10:20 by: Debonair

You really should wake up from that coma.

Posted on 28 August 2016, 18:38 by: bubu1111

Rewrites are the cancer that is killing /h

Posted on 28 August 2016, 20:40 by: crazymagic

@ zen_zen
Except he's obviously trolling with the rewrites and loves the negative feedback he's getting. " :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D "

Posted on 10 October 2016, 08:44 by: AngraMainyuu

What kind of fucking shitstain takes pleasure in rewrites

Posted on 15 April 2017, 18:17 by: Anklaf

Can someone please link the orginally translated version of this? Thank you

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language:	english rewrite
artist:	wakatsuki
male:	bbm dilf old man sole male
female:	bbw big ass big breasts catgirl cheating nakadashi paizuri sole female