My second translated manga i finished this couple of weeks ago
hope you enjoy and again feel free to comment negative and positive
insights about it,thank you! :D

Thank you man. Good job.

Can you translate these hmangas, please :

[Kotoyoshi Yumisuke] Doukoku no Taiyou Koukotsu no Tsuki (Chapters 8, 9 and 10) - https://e-hentai.org/s/f33a5e866d/586245-147

[Methonium] Muchi Lover (Pages 4 - 7 ) - https://e-hentai.org/s/e279a308f6/938881-4

[Akikusa Peperon] Mucchiri Megaton - https://e-hentai.org/g/878835/5c9af0b4bb/

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@grifon i'll try but it might take a long time....i recently try translating 1 japanese tho i ended up not finishing it for now i only translate russian and spanish/Portuguese also french, Vietnamese
im still learning how to translate japanese tho hope you understand :)

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Ok !
Thank you !

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Ayyy lmao!

Based man is based

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Needs Work. Most of it seems like broken english or words are missing or misspelled.

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Lol I was laughing that teacher is such an airhead.

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Sorry but it's unreadable in its current state, I would look into getting a proofreader if I were you.

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She drugs and rapes students, so would this be a case of dick in crazy

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A "re-write" isn't a translation. Nothing is being translated. Refer to your work as re-write to avoid confusion.

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is it me or did you put the dialog from left to right and not right to left like the manga is?

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A rewrite in 2016. Goodness gracious.

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Here's a more accurate translation of the first two pages, so you can see what is actually being said:

P1
- Ah, shit.

- I fell down pretty fuckin' spectacularly, and made myself look stupid in front of my entire class...
- I'd better do something real cool the next time I show off to regain their respect...

- Excuse me; I'm coming in.

- Oh? A visitor?

- Is someone injured? Feeling ill?
- Or did you come here just to talk to me?

P2
- What are you talking about?
- I've got a leg injury. Please take a look at it.
- Oh, so you're the patient, Iwamatsu-sensei! It's been a while since I've had a patient who wasn't a student.

- My, my. There's so much blood... What on earth were you doing?
- We were playing soccer, and I got a bit carried away... I showed them no mercy.

- A wound like this is no big deal to me, but my students insisted that I have it treated...

- There! All done.
- All right! Thanks!

- Geez... Try to act more like a teacher next time.
- Yeah!
- Hmm? Something smells good in here...

Last edited on 28 August 2016, 15:47.

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What a great Duwang!

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Is English you first language comatose? I highly suggest you get somebody who has it as their first language to proofread your work.

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Ugh I wish someone will redo this...

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