Smells like victory

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Look at the size of that thing.

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Back in Jack's day he'd have Dr. Ziegler pumped already.

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It's high noon

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He's got her in his sights.

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I CALL BULLSHIT, SOLDIER AIN'T THAT YOUNG.

IMMERSION RUINED, CAN'T FAP FOREVER.

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That hero will never die.

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@ supergenericanon the setting is when they were actually young.
Notice ana in image 9

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I'm not a young man anymore...

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When you create torrents, make sure to seed them for a while.

I'm talking to you awhitetiger, you lazy cunt.

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I got you in my sights

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@archaos True, but Mercy is almost 20 years younger than Soldier

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>Overwatch is getting doujins

Time to invest in Blizzard.

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can't fap due to grammar mistake in image 5

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In the context of page 6, the original way you had it was correct 'let's see if the real one will be better than the artificial' this is fine as she is saying 'let us see' rather than 'lets' which means allows and doesn't make sense in that sentence. An easy way to know is if you replace any instance of the word lets in a sentence with let us, and see if it makes sense, if it does, it should usually be 'let's'

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Strong wind magic mist
To Asgard the Valkries fly
High overhead they carry the dead
Where blood of my enemies lies.

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Angela Ziegler, 37 years old.

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"you're technique" ugh.

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ERECTIONS NEVER DIE!

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Damn her asshole stretches so easily...she must be sending a lot of patients through her backdoor.

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I'm the one who translated this manga to Korean. And it seems he made this one from my translation. That's why some korean words appear here.
And I found out that he translated it not knowing korean. The entire dialog is like newly create story. It isnt like the original one.

Well I know, nobody cares story in hentai manga.

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damn you, page 5's grammatical error!!!! YOU'REEEEE!!!!!!!!

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Fuck her right in the pussy.

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Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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