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[Ponkpank] Breaking of the Sun 1 - The Teacher's Pet (My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic) [English] [WIP]

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Posted:2016-08-21 00:23
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Posted on 29 April 2016, 18:02 by:   negavamas    PM
Score +153
Yes, because this is the most offensive gallery on the site.
Posted on 30 April 2016, 07:41 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -100
Offensive in terms of writing, yes. Even a generic plot is better than, "Magical OC defeats goddess like beings by being immune to magic." That's on par with those fucking Tohou manga where one of the vampire sisters loses her powers inexplicably just so we can have rape. And that doesn't even get into this sudden mechanical nonsense. Because I'm sure the Equestrians have automated rape machines, and the caribou who are supposed to be just a few hundred refugees invented them within the time span it took them to take the castle. It's just nonsense all over because some people want to be treated like shit and couldn't contain it to themselves. (It's not enough that my OC is raped, I want a whole universe that magically creates rape scenarios!)
Posted on 30 April 2016, 09:03 by:   negavamas    PM
Score +297
Wow, I never thought people wouldn't understand this is an excuse for porn, like 90% of the contents of the site. If you want good porn stories you are in the wrong place, out everything uploaded here there is only a handful that have "good writing".
Posted on 30 April 2016, 11:28 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +44
I understand it's an excuse for porn, but consider this started AS A STORY that someone WROTE OUT and then commissioned to be made, that changes things.
Posted on 04 May 2016, 20:19 by:   negavamas    PM
Score +26
Half of the stuff in this page is like this.
Posted on 14 May 2016, 02:11 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -6
The guy commissioning the series has never picked the best artists, I have to say that much. It is also worth me restating that the person commissioning these pictures has also commissioned stories and the stories are just as halfassed, boring, and ridiculous regarding the source material. This is something that somebody invented purely to get off to, and why they chose the new My Little Pony is ... probably just because it has a large female cast to abuse.

On that note, I have been told by some people that it's not the idea of owning a slave that appeals to people here, but rather being owned. Apparently most people that like this poorly written and OC fueled story fantasize being the slave, not the master.
Posted on 14 May 2016, 06:09 by:   imercenary    PM
Score -100
@ blakfayt

Good artists and writers cost good money... and (usually) have long waiting lists... assuming they're even in the business of taking commissions.

It has nothing to do with the fetish itself. The real issue is the fact that the master/slave fetish has been turned into a 'its not rape if shes willing!'-excuse. Its not unique to the master/slave fetish either. Its really common in lolicon/shotacon/toddlercon stories as well, "its not rape if they don't say 'stop'!" (yeah, I poke my head into some deep dark alleyways)

That said, the story itself isn't bad but it feels like a (novel)fan fiction-to-comic adaptation. Lots of dropped content to fit the medium and all that.
Posted on 16 May 2016, 19:01 by:   skyller    PM
Score +113
This is awesome! I want more of this!
Sauce?
Posted on 28 May 2016, 04:43 by:   kronys    PM
Score +75
The silliest part of the whole "they are immune to magikz so they take over" is the part where as soon as that becomes apparent, intelligent defenders would just stop using magic directly. A boulder launched in their direction with magic is still a flying boulder, with all the force and impact modifiers intact.

It's not even a smart AU. It's basically on par with "John then realized he was the demons"
Posted on 30 May 2016, 14:51 by:   under18thenitsloli    PM
Score +98
Honestly this is all bullshit.
the real problem with this story is that celestia isn't 10 feet tall.
Last edited on 20 June 2016, 18:45.
Posted on 20 June 2016, 02:45 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +34
@imercenary

Yes they do, but the problem is actually with the writing. I'm a good fan of some BDSM and slave stuff (and even loli/shota. I'm a pervert after all) but literally the guy who invented this series has said they don't care about the canon of the universe. At which point STOP COMMISSIONING PEOPLE TO WRITE IT. Do images, stop explaining. But, of course, people ask questions, and the creator responds with an AU that has a billion holes in it, "My OC is immune to magic and curb stomped Celestia, Luna, and Discord in a matter of weeks" not withstanding. On top of that, the AU makes massive leaps and bounds about what things do. In the story that was written, the mares lose because the deer people corrupt the crystal heart, which, as far as we know, has only defeated Sombra because it gave the crystal ponies HOPE. Nothing said the heart was magical, it was a symbol and once it was back Sombra's memory (because he wasn't physical yet, he was a shade) was destroyed. But of course that means, "If it spreads LUST then everypony in the whole world suddenly becomes a whore! That's how it works."

Believe me, you're not missing any "content" except really bad concepts to perpetuate the idea that two boats full of deer people (yes, there is an image that shows this and the creator has said the caribou were on the verge of extinction) could take on three godlike beings because ONE of them (we haven't confirmed if it's every one of them) has anti magic armor that SOMEHOW the three gods were unaware of. It's like making a story where the griffons have a nuke. No explanation, they just have one, and no one else knows about it until they blow up Equestria, and then instead of fighting back the nations just GIVE UP trying to kill maybe 1000 people. Again, remember, the caribou are fighting the Griffons, the zebras have given up, the ponies are defeated, and their species was ALMOST EXTINCT SOMEHOW.

If the story were any more Gary Stu laden the lead Caribou would be named Gregory, and was actually a human in a deer mask all along.
Posted on 22 June 2016, 01:18 by:   Luvlesbos    PM
Score +12
What was the outfit that rarity was wearing?
Posted on 25 June 2016, 20:36 by:   Jarvis_42    PM
Score +21
@Luvlesbos looks like a netted swimsuit.
Posted on 30 June 2016, 14:18 by:   Ilge Täikubu    PM
Score +15
This is the best fucking gallery ever!!! I check every day if some new pics or part 2 has arrived!!!
Posted on 11 July 2016, 09:24 by:   H-Knight    PM
Score +153
It was far worse written than that... ;<

The caribou rank-&-file "soldiers", if they could be called that, mostly all they did was rape the females while the mind-controlled male ponies held the female ponies down. They were the ones that wore magic-immunity armor and wielded magic-disrupting weapons.

On the other hand... King Dainn, the OC "Gary Stu" misogynist conqueror of Equestria, had the following traits:

1. Personally immune to magic, even from the reality-warping power of Discord. No need for anti-magic armor for him, just his "sheer manly superiority".

2. Could disrupt/neutralize magic. Either by his presence of his "sheer manly superiority" (see above) in his immediate vicinity, or with a wave of his hand (at range).

3. Could drain/steal magic.
- a. Stole Discord's reality-warping chaos magic, albeit by trickery. However, it was stupid trickery: {paraphrased} [Dainn]: Hey, drink from this clearly enchanted bottle that looks suspiciously like a genie's lamp-prison. [Discord]: ... ...okay.

- b. Stole Cadance and Shining Armor's combined love & shield magic, albeit by corrupting Shining Armor into helping Dainn mind-break Cadance via gang-raping. {Yes, that's right... Dainn, the king of rape, misogyny, & slavery, "proved himself worthy" of the magic of Love, by having it granted onto him through violent gang-rape... -_- }

- c. Stole Celestia's and Luna's control over the sun and moon, ripped out of them in a brute-force in a mere, minutes-long, curb-stomp battle (if it could be called a battle) and raping.

- d. Absorbed the combined might of the Elements of Harmony artifacts. In this Dainn did "DragonBall Z" it, by effortlessly swatting away their power, then absorbing the Element artifact-jewels into himself and gaining their power. Because you know...the tyrant-king of violent rape, slavery, & brutal conquest was surely worthy of Generosity, Honesty, Kindness, Laughter, Loyalty, and Friendship/Magic, and thus could wield their rainbow power not only in-full, but with even greater capacity than their original Bearers
.

4. Could use said drained/stolen magic as his own, even more proficiently than their original wielders.
- a. After conquering Equestria in less than a week (or a day, I forget), he cowed the rest of the MLP-world from global-retaliation by showing simultaneous control over the sun and moon better than Celestia and Luna, roasting one nation with the power of the Sun, and freezing another nation with the power of the Moon, AT THE SAME TIME.

- b. Erected an impenetrable continent-sized shield-dome around-&-over Equestria {That's right, a continent-sized shield-dome.} using the combo-based Love and Shield magic he stole from Cadance and Shining Armor. The shield-dome, powered and maintained by Dainn himself, could withstand the massed firepower of griffins, dragons, minotaurs, and all other races of the MLP-world beating upon the shield-dome. Why? Because {paraphrased} "Dainn's willpower was mightier than all of them combined." >_<

So yes, Dainn being immune to magic, could disrupt magic, and could steal magic (while immune/disruptive to magic), and use said stolen magic (while being immune/disruptive to magic).

And FoEquestria advocates think this is writing-quality worth defending... /facepalm ;[

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To be clear, I am not railing against the dark sexual themes/fetish for this h-comic; gods know there are far, far, FAR worse here on E-Hentai. But trying to defend (or laud) FoEquestria as any viable grade of writing quality like trying to serve-up a White Castle hamburger-slider and convince the steakhouse customer it is a porterhouse steak, then trying to get the customer to pay porterhouse steak prices by saying, "Well they're both made of beef...". ;|

Or put another (TL;DR) way... [Dr. Zoidberg]: {amid booing at Fry} "The music's bad, and you should feel bad!"

;)
Last edited on 24 January 2020, 02:16.
Posted on 11 July 2016, 19:34 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +51
Jesus, that's even stupider than I would have expected. First, you can't FREEZE THINGS WITH THE MOON, it's the lack of light over a period of time, and even then it's been proven that if the sun were still around the light reflected from the moon, in certain places, would still be very habitable. That just shows a willful ignorance of how things work in real life. And if we want to go in universe ... yeah, even stupider. Shining's shield isn't will powered, and Dainn would still have to have the magical reserves to do what he can do. Magic isn't endless, using magic makes the user tired, even if Tierk had stolen the princesses magic, prolonged use would have made him tired, even Twilight got tired using magic, and her fucking talent IS JUST MAGIC.

But, this is the story by the guy who specifically stated that once Dainn stole the magic GRAVITY is what makes the sun and moon move. (There is an ask page where someone asked who moves the sun, and there's an FoE response picture of Twilight where she says, "Gravity." No joke.)
Posted on 14 July 2016, 22:35 by:   kalygos    PM
Score +17
There are more parts after this one?
Posted on 23 July 2016, 10:46 by:   SLAVEPONYS    PM
Score +10
Hola a todos:

Me gusta este cómic pero honestamente no sé mucho inglés. Por favor, ¿Podrían ustedes publicarlo también en español? Les estaría muy agradecido. Me hubiese gustado que el comienzo se alargase algo más. Desde el principio ya Celestia esta en una jaula. ¿Cómo es posible que ella siendo la autoridad suprema de Equestria terminase como esclava sexual? ¿Y quién es exactamente ese profesor? Voy a usar el traductor de Google para traducir este comentario al inglés en el apartado de abajo.

Hello everyone:

I like this comic but I honestly do not know much English. Please Could you also publish it in Spanish? We would be very grateful. I wish I had overstayed the beginning is something else. From the beginning and Celestia is in a cage. How can she be the supreme authority of Equestria ended as a sex slave? And who exactly is this teacher?
Posted on 25 July 2016, 03:06 by:   jawhawk700    PM
Score +86
Did just read a bunch of MLP fanboys bitch about pony porn? I can't even fathom!
Posted on 25 July 2016, 05:40 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +13
No, jawhawk700, you read a bunch of people with brain cells discussing some faggot's shitty fanfic OC self pleasure material that he calls porn.
Posted on 29 July 2016, 00:33 by:   under18thenitsloli    PM
Score -34
>SLAVEPONYS

Hola slaveponys
This story is bad writing, so if you do get a spanish translation, expect the story to be loco.
Posted on 31 July 2016, 03:56 by:   Quantequila    PM
Score +22
Exactly as thought out as I expect any other ponyporn OC fantasy to be.
Posted on 31 July 2016, 04:09 by:   Wind-Pet    PM
Score -6
I couldn never get into this kind of thing. It's the objectification of the person and the humilliation which makes my winny go sad I guess.
Posted on 31 July 2016, 05:51 by:   D-O    PM
Score -57
Oh, Good Lord! Someone tell me this is a fucking joke, 'cause I don't find it the least bit humorous. A MLP Guro story is much more enjoyable than this and I hate all things Guro.
Posted on 31 July 2016, 13:43 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +30
Oh, and did we mention that the entire rebellion depended on the fact that one or two MALE PONIES thought, "Hey, we should turn our wives, daughters, sisters, and mothers into sluts for an invading army!"? Because I forgot that part too. One of Cadence's guards was just SO SICK of her being a PRINCESS that he decided brainwashing his ENTIRE RACE INTO MINDLESS FUCKDOLLS was a good way to show her what's what. I think that's the guy in the most recent panel getting all bitchy with Celestia. Because, you know, when you boss is a woman and she makes you mad it just makes you want to harm everyone of that gender regardless of relationship to you. And no, no female was spared, they were all turned into whores. So yes, any relatives he may have had that were female (And he at least had a mother somewhere, because he was born) are now slaves.
Posted on 04 August 2016, 04:49 by:   jacobtrue    PM
Score +31
MAH HEAD CANON!
Posted on 08 September 2016, 13:22 by:   Barbarrox    PM
Score +9
Do more, I need it in my life
Posted on 23 September 2016, 09:45 by:   Comrade Claus    PM
Score +63
wow, look at all the walls of text

i guess the content struck a nerve with all the closet bronys here

a lot of hot bdsm content in so few pages, i'm eager to see more

i'm loling at the cassette tapes though, how many people here remember those?

(i especially lol at VHS apparently outlasting dvd+rw, since the former, but not the latter, can be seen in many stores & websites still)
Posted on 01 October 2016, 20:42 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -13
@Claus: The E-hentai board has several bronies as prominent posters. There aren't a lot of closet bronies, there are just a lot of bronies.
Posted on 21 October 2016, 18:35 by:   Bookrat15    PM
Score +0
This Men are the masters and all this.. Urgh.
Boring. And annoying.
Posted on 05 December 2016, 11:04 by:   TwistedGoggles    PM
Score +1
I don't know. Mind break is fun, the art is good, but knowing where this came from kind of takes the fun out of it. Kind of like that Boobsy the Clown thing that's cropped up. You mean to tell me the husband and daughter are like, "Yeah, turn her into a slutty clown and make her forget all about what made her, her."

Magic is the cause here, but I don't know. I like the idea that some men would be immune to the corruption and fight back. Then the story can illustrate the strength of a man staying above corruption and how corruption can easily take a man down. That would be cool. Men got them all into this mess, men can get them out too.

But nah, for right now let's give Celestia a bowl of cum to eat. Probably a good idea to throw some hay in there too. Not going to throw hay in there? Oh.
Posted on 06 December 2016, 02:23 by:   RiftWalker    PM
Score +46
The amount of mad fanboys in the comments is hilarious,are you guys really complaining about the plot of some random MLP porn?

Try using a smaller dildo next time and maybe you guys won't be so butthurt.
Posted on 10 December 2016, 12:15 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -18
@RiftWalker: Yes, I will complain about the constantly boring and terrible fanfictions that people jack off to. The art here isn't great, it's passable, the story is terrible, the only reason you fap to this is because it's your fetish, and yet there are faggots on the internet that call this, and I QUOTE DIRECTLY, "An interesting universe to explore." No it's not, it's bad porno dialogue the universe. I will always be pissed off, as an author, when people flock to stupidly written tripe and call it great. The same way I'm upset about the Twilight series.
Posted on 20 May 2018, 06:52 by:   imercenary    PM
Score +2
Yikes, hindsight is terrifying.

I still haven't read the canon FoE story but I have looked at the MLP brony community and FoE fanboys are fucking radioactive. I looked at the comments section for a FoE story and people were gutting someone for asking about the universe. Apparently theres some people took the concept, broke away from the original author and now theres competing versions of FoE? I can't figure that shit out. Just make a clean break and make a new universe.
Posted on 07 October 2018, 23:44 by:   LastKing405    PM
Score +59
I cant believe people complains on a porn site. Shut the fuck up. We're all degenerates here.
Posted on 17 October 2019, 23:28 by:   Doctor_Thompson    PM
Score +7
Why does this have the Fasha/Celipa tag? She's a dragon ball character, and is nowhere in this.

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