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Bech Time 2

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Posted:2016-07-25 17:18
Parent:None
Visible:No (Replaced)
Language:Japanese  
File Size:69.14 MiB
Length:29 pages
Favorited:27 times
Rating:
63
Average: 1.73
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Posted on 25 July 2016, 17:18 by:   Jimbo Jin    PM
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horny slut gets a dick inside her holes. she loves it and cant get enough
Posted on 24 August 2016, 09:47 by:   Tarlfgar    PM
Score +5
I think the biggest flaw of these series is that we get so many close-ups on ecstatic faces, yet actual sex is only shown at the lats second.

The panels where she strips and then gets groped are pretty hot, but then they last too long so the tension isn't there anymore. It could've been fixed by adding some dialogue, that could allow you to control the pace at which the reader goes through panels (less text=faster reading). Then we get the hottest panel in the comic, the doggystyle one, but afterwards we immediately switch back to close-ups of faces. Last two pics happen out of blue and they don't really work as "a finish" because of that.

Lastly, a "lying on the ground, exhausted after intercourse" panel at the end would work nicely to wrap the whole thing up, put that's just a personal preference
Posted on 26 August 2016, 16:20 by:   dope    PM
Score +4
Okay so there are no pics of her being dicked until the last 2. So she's not soaked in cum. That would be sweat. Which means that you went way to hard on the effects.

Like a couple drops here and there will get the reader to see that they are hot an sweaty from sexual passion. But this looks like he dumped a bucket of water on her before every panel and then decides to dick her after dumping a gallon on her head.
Posted on 20 November 2016, 06:21 by:   Razzle    PM
Score +40
Is that first picture a really shittily edited/butchered mogudan pin-up?
Posted on 19 December 2016, 07:06 by:   gib    PM
Score +22
these look they have been traced from mogudan.

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