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[JessicaRae] Don't Monkey Around a Kitsune

Western
Posted:2016-07-22 00:04
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:6.64 MiB
Length:5 pages
Favorited:93 times
Rating:
69
Average: 2.62

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Posted on 22 July 2016, 00:04 by:   Nanashi Genmu    PM
Uploader Comment
http://aryion.com/g4/user/JessicaRae
http://jessica-rae-3.deviantart.com/
https://www.patreon.com/Jessica_Rae?ty=h

ryla belongs to http://aryion.com/g4/user/CassyInko
Posted on 22 July 2016, 04:28 by:   jackalo    PM
Score +27
holy shid, how did that fox chick manage to swallow someone of equal size without her stomach exploding. she also swallowed that monkey chick while upside down O.O (comic physics ftw).

not the best comic but deserves better than the current average rating. 2.5/5.0 a decent first time read.
Posted on 22 July 2016, 13:35 by:   kuman2013    PM
Score +20
Good Art. looking forward to your next comic
Posted on 24 July 2016, 04:48 by:   slappadap2    PM
Score +11
give us some dark vore ;) (dark vore is not directly correlated to gore though)
Posted on 25 July 2016, 00:50 by:   Nanashi Genmu    PM
Score +21
@ slappadap2 example?
Posted on 30 July 2016, 18:03 by:   Fire32    PM
Score -1
So, normally this would be a case where I walk in, look at comic, nod, and wander out. Same size / humanoid-humanoid / big belly vore isn't an interest of mine (although I do like digestion).

But why is this comic's rating so low?! Well, I suppose I can guess. Folk who do like the fetish involved are probably giving this a 3.5-4, which isn't enough to counterbalance the "ewwww" patrol. For everyone reading this, if you feel compelled to vote and the above fetish isn't your thing, pretend it was your thing at the same quality level and then vote. Like, if you only like vanilla sex imagine this was 5 pages of sex + build up at the same art quality.

On the comic itself: The art is nice, although I think page 3 could flow better (either have the second panel show the monkey in the middle of transitioning from the I-feel-sorta-safe-but-am-still-worried expression she currently has in that panel to being surprised, or make it two panels (one with current expression, fox hand pulling her up out of sight, THEN hit monkey with the climbing fox surprise), and the monkey's expression while *jump*ing could use more fear/concern/determination/anything in it (she currently looks.. calm?).

Also, the digestion scenes are nicely done but the eating scene itself obscures the monkey girl getting eaten in every panel. Don't know the history on this piece, might be a reason for the number of pages/panels, but either adding a few more panels or maybe changing the perspective on page 4 panel one to show the monkey girl's futile struggle would give the comic broader appeal.

The initial banter / build up is also nicely done.

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