...hey there tumor tits, you expressionless dot-eyed robot.
36: Well if I were leave legitimate criticism, it's that there's emotion to the whole thing, a massive dissonance between your dialogue and character's actual expression.
You've seen those commercial with expanding tits before, right? Or even the amateur bandicam stuff on youtube? There are degrees of shock, ecstasy, and horror intermingled throughout the whole process. Just look it up and study their faces. And since this is e-hentai, it wouldn't hurt to throw in an actual plot and sex scenes too (particularly a background).
As far as actual art goes, she's generic and plain down to the bone structure on her face. But you know what is amazing? The texture on her dress and hair. The light reflection and detail on those two facets are miles ahead of the actual model.
Hey Claus! I try to at least have MY characters show an expression or two! You're right about the story though. just 'they get bigger' is only effective while you're learning to make things
I like this work. I love breast's size and some pics that show the process (21-22-23) are my favs. The "story" is not the best but the author already know that, that's why he post the last image as ad.