Horrible dialogue. Also, what the hell is up with that weird afterword? Human fingers? urgh

Not to mention the art at the end which probably isn't even by the same artist who drew this doujin in the first place, oh boy.

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Did Delphox bit on his cock on Page 8?

Base +1, 1qazqaz +7

You're right, dialogues make no sense.

Base +25, ufoflash +6, kryzeth +6, bigscuba +2

Dialogue was awful in some places, probably not the translator though (I hope not anyway.) but that Eevee thing was fucking hilarious. "Whoops, knocked up my Gardevoir. ... *release it into the wild* No one one will know."

Base +17, 1qazqaz +6, bigscuba +2