The envelope with mother's photoghaps accidentally (or may be not?) falls into hands of her son...

Thanks for your work.
The editing work is great.
I hope to see more of your Russian translation in english? you should find someone to check the translation it needs some work.

edit: thanks for the proofread version

Last edited on 11 May 2016, 20:13.

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Yeah, you should get someone to proofread your work. To a native english speaker it sounds very unnatural.

Just a couple of lines that stood out to me on the second image

"Japanese"
"Can you bring me my handbag"
*With curiosity he looks in it*
"Mother takes it and goes away in a hurry"
"Where some photos are found inside"

Take it with a grain of salt since I barely scrapped by in my english classes. My grammar and spelling isn't stellar either.

Pretty decent uncensored edits. There should be some scanlators in the forums more than happy to help a budding team with grammar.

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Hope the second part get Translated too!
https://e-hentai.org/g/229243/4fa6f1609c/

@Toxify
Im happy even how it is. As long as I know whats going on Im ok with any Translation as long as its acurate to the story line.
Still Thx for your hardwork

Last edited on 07 May 2016, 22:45.

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Great work .... I like your modesty you got great potential

PS - Your 100x better then laruffi work some confidence and get a nice proofreading to do your dirty work ;)

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Oh Lawd! Somebody translated an Ishidaya?! *faints*

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Thanks! I really liked both parts of this work, great to see it translated

PS: Where is that last pic from? looks awesome xD

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Whats the credit page from?

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I'm giving the poor grammar a pass because some Ishidaya has finally been translated. This marks the first Ishidaya work translated to english.

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jaja dart engrish! but thank you so much for the translate

credit page artist :Migakeba Hikaru

Last edited on 07 May 2016, 05:17.

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Glad someone picked this artist up. please do more in the future!

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At the very least, please hire someone who speaks English to proofread.

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Love it. Thanks for translating!

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Thanks all of you for your comments!
Now we understood, that level of our english translation is low, but guys, if someone wants to see second part of it with "normal" tranlslation - you may help us with proofread for free (for all of us) -
please, send an e-mail on darkaellen@yandex.ru
We will be glad of any help.

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Guys, I really want to work on these mother/son hentais, so, if you find any translator(or you are one), let me know and I'll edit everything, they're both fucking amazing:

[Milf Shobou] Shucchou Suru Otou-san Choukyou Sareru Okaa-san (/g/916570/dc62fc4c29)

[MILF Shobou] Hahaoya no Mukashi no Mizugi Sugata no Shashin ga Do-Strike Datta [Digital] (/g/827835/29f8292a40)

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thanks for the proofread

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