Artist has a good grasp on storyline & positions, however needs to work more on the actual art. Other than that, I think he has a good start if he can improve his art-style.

Base +3, NeXuS_i_Beyond +1

i closed it at "your wet"

Base +6

Goddamn please someone tell this guy to get laid himself before he writes down fantasies of a 12 year old.

Base +5