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Posted:2016-05-02 11:14
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Language:English  
File Size:3.18 MiB
Length:4 pages
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Rating:
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Average: 4.08

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Posted on 02 May 2016, 11:14 by:   joabes    PM
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http://foreverknight.deviantart.com/art/Rainy-Nights-2of4-600748724
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Posted on 02 May 2016, 20:01 by:   Darlumina    PM
Score +7
Okay it sounds stupid to me that he say he doesn't want her to get sick. I think it would of been better if he said it doesn't feel right having you sleep on the floor while I sleep in your bed, or something similar. Still it is good.
Posted on 03 May 2016, 00:42 by:   penguin001    PM
Score +9
@Darlumina, yeah a little Too much of the standard asian cliché writing there, translator (or even original writer) may have done better tweaking that
Posted on 03 May 2016, 00:51 by:   riza D    PM
Score +6
He's just throwing her words back at her.
Posted on 03 May 2016, 03:31 by:   Lucario1    PM
Score +12
its nice, but you could have made Wilde a little less oblivious to her intentions. when a girl sleeps on the floor in her own house so you can sleep on a bed she is passed into you she has fallen in love with you.

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