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[valdam] Josoko Onanism - Crossdresser's Masturbation

[valdam] 女装子 手淫

Artist CG
Posted:2016-04-29 09:46
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:Japanese  
File Size:874.3 KiB
Length:5 pages
Favorited:25 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.08

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Posted on 29 April 2016, 13:57 by:   arkher    PM
Score +60
A cute cross dresser playing with them self through their panties. An excellent topic, but the art leaves quite a bit to be desired.
Posted on 29 April 2016, 14:40 by:   valdam    PM
Score +55
thanks. by the way, what`s the most problem in this images? his(her) face, structure , or color? i think if anyone can tell me, i would do it better now.
Posted on 29 April 2016, 17:18 by:   allisnotlost    PM
Score +59
firstly, everything from coloring to lineart is way too flat-looking. If you like the realistic style, learn to think and draw in dimensions. also, you really don't know how cocks behave in panties.
Posted on 29 April 2016, 17:52 by:   svines85    PM
Score +2
Heh....good stuff, thanks a lot :)
Posted on 30 April 2016, 01:55 by:   valdam    PM
Score +55
How about her(his) face? Is she pretty?
Posted on 30 April 2016, 04:39 by:   MrMuffinMan    PM
Score +60
@valdam, Its pretty good. Better then most artists. I like the coloring style, like water colors or something? Also was this done with a tablet or something like that?

I don't think you use this method but then allot of artists dont seem to know it exists as MANY manga artists are guilty of misplacing facial features. Once you know this method everyones art sticks out if they dont know this method. im not sure what its called either... but essentially you draw a oval shape for the head and you draw a curved line down the front center as if it were going around the oval in 3D space, if its more to the left it for the character to look left, right for right etc. It would be centered/aiming in the direction the character is looking. then you do the same but horizontal around the oval, this sets whether they are looking up down or straight and gives you the exact placement of the eyes and all facial features on a "3D" appearing head. When you know this method you will notice MANY artists have eyes slipping off the side of the face and art that looked "strange" to you where you couldnt put your finger on why it looked strange will now be glaringly obvious. To your credit, everything is vary well placed even without know this.

I think you are skilled enough where all you need is more practice, i know some artists try to improve their work by doing speed drawing, literally taking no more then a minute, maybe 5 to sketch something out to get in more practice. keep up the good work though and good luck. I wouldnt have bothered typing this if i didnt think you could handle it.

And now i wait to get downvoted into oblivion by artists that think eye slippage is "cute" or who take massive offense for this being mentioned(i really never understood the outrage)

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