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Darren's Adventure (The Simpsons) [Ongoing]

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Posted:2016-04-28 03:43
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Language:English  
File Size:21.71 MiB
Length:28 pages
Favorited:539 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.71
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Posted on 28 April 2016, 03:43 by:   juventus89    PM
Uploader Comment
this is a comic that i am commissioning
it is the story of my OC Darren in the simpsons world.
plus more drawings of my OC.
my profile page on hentai foundry, if you want to follow me there.
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/salem89/profile
if you want to support me, you can go here to my patreon.

https://www.patreon.com/user?u=243697&ty=h
Posted on 12 March 2015, 23:21 by:   SHsurreal    PM
Score +1074
your commissions and OC are garbage
Posted on 13 March 2015, 00:22 by:   Avopo    PM
Score +590
Is this guy trying to sell a continuation of a Simpsons comic starring his own self-insert made up character?
Posted on 13 March 2015, 02:13 by:   BrimstoneZV    PM
Score +146
seems like a pretty normal commission to me
Posted on 13 March 2015, 11:58 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +37
So much, so little time. I'll mostly ignore the OC thing (Which is kind of a big problem, mostly because homeless men with big dicks don't tend to get laid just because they have big dicks. Especially at 30) and focus on the obvious satirical joke of, "It's not rape if she likes it by the end!" (also note how a 9 inch dick circumvents one's chosen religion and morals)
Posted on 14 March 2015, 17:43 by:   pureyang    PM
Score +24
@blakfayt: He didn't rape Maude, marge touched her hand while darren her shoulder while both begged her to keep it a secret.
And then she decided to join in of her own free will.
And she went for lesbian sex with marge first before even touching the guy.

@juventus89PMS: "Selling the comic" is a turn of phrase that means trying to convince people to read it / that its good. Not literally selling it for money.
Posted on 26 March 2015, 02:20 by:   eatmyass    PM
Score +12
why did i watched that.
my eyes wont forgive me for a while.
Posted on 30 March 2015, 23:57 by:   Saladburger    PM
Score +56
I don't wanna live on this planet anymore. I've seen much shit being paid for recently but this takes the cake.
Posted on 04 April 2015, 13:35 by:   defsers    PM
Score +133
Just something about that face makes you want to punch it, or hit him with your car, or pop in to vote down a gallery after seeing the thumbnail every fucking day on this very website even though you don't give a shit about Simpsons porn to begin with.

It's not the author or artists' fault, don't feel bad OC OP, you've just tapped into something beyond yourself.
Posted on 21 April 2015, 08:42 by:   Conrad Lant    PM
Score +37
How come he has a pot belly in the first few pages, and then later on he's as thin as a needle?
Posted on 19 July 2015, 10:36 by:   MisterSinister    PM
Score +21
900 Dollary-Doos?!
Posted on 21 July 2015, 13:54 by:   Conrad Lant    PM
Score +87
For juventus89

Changing the artist and the look of your OC doesn't make him any less shitty.
Why do you keep changing artists to commission your comic, when each one is worse than the one before?
Posted on 21 July 2015, 19:21 by:   juventus89    PM
Score +18
for conrad lat

it wasnt my intention to change the last artist, he had personal problems and had to stop drawing.
and if you really dont like my OC and comic, why do you keep coming here? ;)
Posted on 30 July 2015, 10:56 by:   ventzx1    PM
Score +3
For Juventus89 I pm'd you
Posted on 05 August 2015, 13:22 by:   xenophone    PM
Score +49
So much hatred here... use that energy against the anti porn people and leave others to their personal fetishes. Don't like it? Don't waste your time coming in here. =)
Posted on 05 August 2015, 18:24 by:   fighterzer98    PM
Score +55
Don't listen to the comments. You paid for this and it's yours. Do whatever you want.
Posted on 04 September 2015, 02:08 by:   hermit20    PM
Score +17
Just me or in the chapter 2 page with Lisa and Bart does Darren seem like a Jojo's Bizarre Adventure character with the posing?
Posted on 11 November 2015, 01:47 by:   blunt005    PM
Score +122
>tfw you can't expunge things as garbage anymore
Posted on 11 November 2015, 03:20 by:   AdmiralQQ    PM
Score +9
Please stop uploading this for the love of God.
Posted on 27 November 2015, 16:01 by:   Luiselguay    PM
Score +14
I liked me the page 16 :D
Posted on 07 December 2015, 20:22 by:   junipher    PM
Score +23
its kinda weird how the artstyle jumped from josemalvado to arabatos, thats one of the weirdest things i've ever seen in a commission comic, what happened? jose decided to raise the price mid-work?
Posted on 08 December 2015, 09:52 by:   juventus89    PM
Score +12
for juniper.

jose is good but arabatos is better.
thats all
Posted on 07 January 2016, 12:30 by:   Red Fire    PM
Score -3
and manjula makes me favorited this
Posted on 07 January 2016, 13:31 by:   Chen Nyan~    PM
Score +51
Seppuku immediately. Your OC is bad and you should feel bad.
Posted on 07 January 2016, 17:03 by:   Muffdiver884    PM
Score +14
Poor Milhouse. Stupid, stupid Milhouse.
Posted on 10 January 2016, 21:51 by:   Evil Emperor Proteus    PM
Score +44
I actually sorta like it when Arabatos picked it up... I for one welcome our new titty monster Marge, Lisa and Manjula overlords... Edna is probably a given, but here are some women recommendations.

* Ms. Hoover
* Ruth and Laura Powers
* Jessica Lovejoy
* Terri and Sherri
* Allison Taylor

There are plenty of hot background/one-shot babes in The Simpsons as well.
* The Superbowl commercial babes.
* The Soul Fast-Transit System background dancers.
* The Asian girl Homer was ogling when he caught Lisa doing a dirty dance to the TV in season 3.
* The "JUST DO IT" girls.
* The Pfizer Girls
* The Cigarette Billboard Babes from when Homer tried to de-gay Bart.
* The Burlesque House Girls
* That hot mom who bought two copies of Bone-Storm for her spoiled brat in that Christmas episode.
Posted on 13 January 2016, 22:32 by:   juventus89    PM
Score +17
for Evil Emperor Proteus

first i need to discuss it with the writer i am working with but some of the girls mentioned are in our plans already ;)

and thank you, im happy you like the comic plus arabatos is a really great artist !!!
Posted on 22 January 2016, 16:08 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +38
Hey Luann. Your son is bleeding to death in a dumpster...you don't care. You're about to get some dick.
Posted on 23 February 2016, 06:03 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score -3
Milhouse is still little? Why?
Posted on 26 February 2016, 15:26 by:   juventus89    PM
Score +19
for hengfar

its ok dont worry i understood you. thanks for doing an account just to say you like the comic :)
i dont mind the haters anymore, if they dont like the comic they can just keep on going.

about the four pages, on patreon it says like that but with taxes etc i got enough money for 3 pages !
and there is still one page because arabatos was sick and started working on the comic pages very late.
the next pages are very near and you will get them before the end of the month.
this has happened only this month, usually you get the pages before the end of the month
Posted on 26 February 2016, 19:52 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +3
@juventus89 Fair enough.
Posted on 27 February 2016, 04:58 by:   Muffdiver884    PM
Score -2
Poor Milhouse...Hahahahahahaha...
Posted on 28 February 2016, 07:16 by:   Hanmac    PM
Score +3
Yeah the Milhouse scene was unnessary cruel, I would have liked it more if he would be able to have fun with her too.
Posted on 02 March 2016, 22:10 by:   weloveme    PM
Score +23
I'd rather watch my parents have sex than your shitty OC destroy The Simpsons
Posted on 28 March 2016, 13:46 by:   locococococo    PM
Score +10
I am super confused for the reason why Darren has sex with everyone right away, just seems a little stange :D
Posted on 01 April 2016, 03:57 by:   FarkyMac    PM
Score +74
Dude, if your artists keep dropping your comic, maybe there's a reason for it. If the majority of the people on this site don't like it, maybe there's a reason for that, too.

Nobody likes a self-insert. Nobody likes a Mary Sue. Your story is bad. Your character is bad. And the fact that you're in so much denial, and keep answering comments as if what you say matters...it's really just saddening.

Why are you posting this anywhere? It's for you. If you didn't want "hate", you shouldn't have opened this up to the court of public opinion.

Also, why are the dude's wallet and a bottle of Duff on the reference sheet? The former is stupid, and the latter is just unnecessary.
Posted on 01 April 2016, 05:54 by:   Chen Nyan~    PM
Score +90
Your OC is still shit and you should feel like shit for putting this garbage on the internet.
Posted on 24 April 2016, 18:46 by:   8bitdahpandah    PM
Score +14
this is...meh
Posted on 28 April 2016, 12:35 by:   garrador    PM
Score +49
Please stop spending your money on this and save it. You would be doing yourself and the world a favor.
Posted on 28 April 2016, 23:42 by:   Tachibanoid    PM
Score +12
Ngl, why is this even placed with yaoi in the first place...

I wanted to see men fucking not female ham flaps
Posted on 07 May 2016, 16:53 by:   werdnaoh23    PM
Score -7
Ill say this much, Edna Krabappel looks great, that's it
Posted on 07 May 2016, 18:26 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +0
Page 40 Ah! Another zombie!
Posted on 26 May 2016, 23:15 by:   blackheart327    PM
Score +27
This is my oc he is awesome and perfect in every way with no flaws
Posted on 27 May 2016, 02:21 by:   FarkyMac    PM
Score -2
Wow, this guy is STILL insisting on doing this. o3o
Posted on 04 June 2016, 22:12 by:   BigBoobsPerv    PM
Score +10
Don't forget, this is a PORN COMIC. I love the Simpsons as much as the next guy and I actually appreciate the artwork by Arabatos (no offense juventus89, but I didn't like the beginning off the comic) and though yes it does seem like a pretty stupid comic, that's just the way most comics on the site are. I mean seriously: how many comics have you read that made you say "That makes sense" or "This is a good comic based off existing material" without going through it to just see the porn? I mean seriously think about that before you shit on someone else's work. I've seen a lot of people take existing material and add in their own OC's to their stories with the original characters. And yes I'll admit that some of those comics have mixed feelings and I have seen some that are just shit altogether. But this comic is alright and way better than other OC characters in other stories that I honestly don't want to mention. But I think of this OC as better than any other characters from other artists.
Posted on 06 June 2016, 17:32 by:   FarkyMac    PM
Score -1
Not everybody is shitting on this comic, if you can call it that. Personally, I'd call it masturbation in and of itself, but that's besides the point. The fact is...it's not very good. And pointing that out is not necessarily a bad or wrong thing to do. If the poster didn't want to open himself up to critiques, he shouldn't have made the comic public. It's that simple.
Posted on 11 September 2016, 17:06 by:   Nave the DM    PM
Score -7
You know, I had browsed this and ignored it due to how awful it was, but then I started reading the comments, and I thought about how the actual criticism this comic has received, constructive or otherwise, was being responded with:

"If you don't like it, leave!" "Go somewhere else if it's not your thing!" "Ignore the trolls, this is great!" "It's not like there's anything better out there!" "IT'S JUST PORN!"

Wow, just look at all these non-arguments. To be fair, I don't see the guy who pays for this comic making these comments, but come on, seriously, this is what you'll dig your feet into the sand and defend?

Nothing is except from criticism. Absolutely nothing. This can be criticized as much as anything else on this site, and it's awful. Is that my opinion? Of course it is. It's unappealing to me, and frankly I feel sorry for anyone this does appeal to. There is, in fact, such a thing as quality and quality can in fact be measured in commonly-accepted ways. Everyone's opinion on what does and does not constitute as quality can be quite different, but the core of the matter is that this is a story about a mary sue. People don't LIKE mary sues, except their creators and people with pretty fucking terrible taste. There's literally nothing interesting here; the character just does whatever the hell he wants with no consequence and fucks whoever. It's mindless, senseless, everything is the same. No variety except in which big-titted bimbo is being fucked at the moment.

The dialogue is drivel. The art is flat and emotionless. The character designs are laughable. The fact that this is based on the Simpsons is literally the only thing it has going for it; but if he had made this black and white and changed the names, there'd literally be no difference. The fact that the main character is an OC is pretty minute when you think about how nobody in the story is really in-character anyway, so the guy could've commissioned a completely original comic and we'd be at the same end result. No difference at all.

This silly nonsensical argument of "It's just porn! It's not like there is better written material elsewhere on the site! You can't expect quality when it's just porn!"

That's bullshit and you're bullshit. How dare we look for QUALITY? How dare we look for something we can actually fap to and not cringe or laugh at? Believe it or not, there IS in fact much better material out there, and you don't even have to search hard for it. I personally think InCase is a good artist, and his works are both sexy and well-written, with characters that actually experience obstacles or have characterization that changes over time. I also love Ganassa's work. I just read a fantastic comic about two cousins fucking with great artwork and fun colorful characters: https://e-hentai.org/g/905471/348b68f1ff/

"But you can't compare them! That's not fair!"

Well, too bad, I did, because everything can be criticized and everything can be compared. I sincerely hope the guy who makes these, pays for them or whatever, learns just how terrible this work really is. Every single compliment you receive is hollow and short, so that's why I wanted to leave you this lengthy criticism, but make no mistake: I won't be coming back to see whatever your reply is. This comic doesn't offend me, it doesn't disgust me, I'm just so utterly apathetic in regards to it. It's boring, it's bland, it's ugly in its story and style. Criticism is meant to improve, and you get nothing out of people saying "this is great!" or "this sucks!" so there you go.

If you honestly think this work is fine and you're happy with it, and your fans are fine with it, hell, more power to you. But know that, deep down, it's objectively terrible on several levels. You can either work on actually improving the quality or let it wallow in this mediocrity, that's your call. I'm out of here and I'll be glad to never look at this again.
Posted on 15 March 2017, 18:00 by:   Darkdx    PM
Score +1
still ongoing oh man im waiting

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