This is the alt version of https://e-hentai.org/g/921374/32eaa341f9/ , with the files not edited for "very, very large amount of sweat, drool and other bodily fluids", using files provided by tk-910 in his credits the original release. Since nobody else bothered to upload it, here it is. All credits should go to the original uploader, editor and presumably translator, tk-910.

Major request to tk-910: can you share the RAW too, pretty please? With a magical girl on top? Thanks!

You uploading the gallery a second time just made me more likely than ever not to upload the raws.

This was kind of like "here, let me spit in your face real quick. okay, now please give me free stuff!"

Last edited on 08 April 2016, 13:02.

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@tk-910

then why did you provide a DL link for the unedited translation in the first place? You could guess that it would be posted here or in other places sooner or later.

By the way if you upload that version by yourself, you will supersede this gallery as the translator and get all the honors for it.

Also, personnally I prefer to have the works of artists as they were drawn and published (that includes not decensoring them, but that's a question of taste).

TLDR: Sharing is caring.

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This is so much better. The hell was tk-910 thinking posting such a massive edit first just based on his own preferences?

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@tk-910
Dude, the rules from the site are totally stacked in your favor. You can reupload this gallery as your own and keep your gallery with the body fluids edited out. Nobody is saying you shouldn't have edited them out. The point is that uploading an edited version of a gallery without also uploading the unedited version is frowned upon by the community, and for good reasons. Would you like people to upload a doujinshi with one of your favorite fetishes edited out? The rules even point out that adding censorship to a doujin is an expunging offense. People can never upload the unedited gallery, but the most likely reaction is they will receive backlash for it. Which is why the easiest way to avoid this drama is to upload both versions in the first place. You even get more benefits from the system that way, if you care about GP and the like.

@tk-910
It should also be very easy for you to just upload both galleries to the system. If you go back to my first comment to you, I suggested to do that in the first place. I have no problem with writing down a mediafire link. That is not the point. I have written hundreds of letters just to make the point that YOU could have avoided this, and you can solve it to your favor at any time.
No matter how much users downvote you or say mean things to you, comments are worthless. Red_Piotrus himself would vote to expunge his own gallery if you just put this gallery in the system instead of just leaving it in a mediafire link that could just as well be removed later.

Last edited on 08 April 2016, 20:01.

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@tk-910

I do appreciate your translation and share, but I still don't get it why you uploaded the unedited files to MF instead of here, seriously.

Not only you need to trouble yourself packing and uploading the files individually again, but most downloaders have to type the letters to access the unedited files,

which wasted both your and downloaders' time while you may earn less GP from gallery reviews, and even worse, having arguments like what happened in comments of your gallery.

TBH, most people won't care about what your feitish is, they just want an easy download instead of searching your gallery "smartly".

Why make things so complex?

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"Red_Piotrus himself would vote to expunge his own gallery if you just put this gallery in the system instead of just leaving it in a mediafire link that could just as well be removed later."

Sure, I already gave credit to tk-910 in the gallery description, and I uploaded it only because neither he nor anyone else bothered to do so. You are more then welcome to reupload the gallery and it will be yours too. Still waiting for the RAW. Either you want to "give to the fandom" or not. The fandom certainly appreciates both versions of the gallery, and it would appreciate the RAW, too.

I don't understand why the dramu. Just share stuff, ignore the trolls, appreciate the nice commenters. Worked for me for years. Oh, and remember DFTT. Once you start complaining/ranting/whining - they'll join the feast you are laying out for them.

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What the hell is wrong with you people? Do you read anything at all people say? You keep obsessing over who actually uploaded the gallery. The problem is that Red_Piotrus went full scumbag status about it. There is literally zero reason it re upload it

@Miles Edgeworth
>I do appreciate your translation and share
No, you clearly don't.

>which wasted both your and downloaders
No, it's actually less total uploads and file transfers than uploading it to this website twice. Either way you have to repack the files. And the way I did it consolidated everything into one upload.

>Why make things so complex?
I didn't make anything complex. 10 letters is not complex, you typed 20 times that writing the post you just did. I post that is literally all wrong.

@Red_Piotrus
>I uploaded it only because neither he nor anyone else bothered to do so
No, you did it because you're insane and think this reader website is the end all of the world.

>ignore the trolls
Autism, you don't even know what the word troll means.
No really, you are literally autistic. Seek help. You honest to god think using yours words and explaining things is "being a troll".

>I don't understand why the dramu.
That's because you're autistic and don't understand basic social interaction. And again, you're a scumbag.

>Still waiting for the RAW.
You're never getting it. At least not from me. Mainly because you still don't understand how you are in the wrong for uploading other people's work.

>Red_Piotrus himself would vote to expunge his own gallery if you just put this gallery
No one other than you retards gives a fuck about this. The WHOLE issue that you went full scumbag status reuploded someone else's with without permission all because you're Asperger's levels obsessed with having things your way.

And to both of you mongoloids, how about you try actually addressing what I said rather than going on about things that already proven wrong.

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@tk-910: I'll repeat what I said in the PM: I think you are a trolling asshole who enjoys flaming much more then sharing stuff with the community, but you can prove me wrong by uploading the RAW. Now, let's see whether you'll share - or flame.

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Always upload the raws. Saves a lot of trouble for everyone and prevents situation like this where stuff was edited out and not uploaded properly (you could have removed the MF link at any time, resulting in no more original content, where the only one who can do that here unless the gallery gets expunged is Tenboro).

Also Madoka stuff happening in a "canon" doujinshi this time. Anticrack must be confused.

Last edited on 15 June 2016, 08:57.

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