That's it, all done.
I'm onto the next project.
AS usual, give me feedback.
I'm learning still .u.
avoid feedback about consistency, that's not real feedback if
I already know and have mentioned it in previous descriptions.

If you wanna suggest what my next 6 pages should contain feel free to slap something into my inbox on tumblr!
http://marbearis-pen.tumblr.com/

The artstyle leaves something to be desired, admittedly, but this has potential. I don't see why the rating is so low.

Base +2, Hugokarenque -6, Dovahkren +4, oneiwonder +7, scorpianpp +44, Magaso +6, seventhsage +2, arashinoken +5, 1qazqaz +6, Bittersweetness +6

@zeonet
I'm grateful for your honesty :D
This is a pet project of mine, I'm doing my best to draw a character more consistently.
Over time the i should grow more comfortable doing so and my art style should be up to par ^-^ this has about 3 more pages plus the cover page so hopefully by then it should be better.

Base +4, Dovahkren +4, oneiwonder +7, 1qazqaz +6

it's got a bit of consistency problems, but otherwise I like it!

Base +6

Great work. I can see you are gonna be a nice contributer. Cant wait for more

Base +6, Tsuijango +7, Mistikaphantoka +6

Don't quit your day job.

Base +21, Magaso -6, Tsuijango -7, crazymagic +12, Mistikaphantoka -6

thank you all for your feed back :D
Except for you Observer1980

I'm not that good at drawing, I am decent however.
I don't intend on this being an income source anytime soon.

So enjoy the free shit that I am nice enough to give.

on to the next big thing!

Base +4, Tsuijango +7, Mistikaphantoka +6, 1qazqaz +6