This is an improved version of my previous translation, now with proper proofreading.

The genre of the month: Elder Sisters XD

I think you did a pretty good job.

Thanks, this work was kind of nostalgic as it was one of my first hentai I read.

Base +10, riwamixer99 +10, oneiwonder +7, Lostalgia +5, Ooe Kintarou +3, Decibull -7, BlueSmoke +5

Not bad, you actually did nicely.
Wish I could help you with the whole proofreading but I lack the time to do any side jobs due to my 89 hour job.

Best of luck and it's nice to see people like you pick on translations.

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Yeah this was good thanks the neesan was hella sexy.

Base +6, Azura Meta +6, Lostalgia +5, Ooe Kintarou +3, duhuhuhu +6, MyakuGodEater +4

You did a pretty good job here. The only mistakes worth noting were:
"She's looking her TV Drama" on page 13. It's "watching", not looking.
On page 5 it should be "Did you say anything?", not "Did you said anything?"
On page 4 it should be "We will really get in trouble if we're discovered" in the bottom right panel.

That's pretty much it. There are English natives who make worse mistakes.

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The post by Vivi1993 is pretty spot-on. If you need any help for proofreading, I am available whenever I am online.

Base +3, Ooe Kintarou +3, Chrono13 -8

Love this kind of hentai when the woman is drawn like you can plunge your hands in her flesh.

Base +12, Ooe Kintarou +3, EonLeader +4, mala112 +5, MachinaWeapon +9, arashinoken +5

This shouldn't be uncensored as black transparent bars are still visible in some pages.

Base +6

... what is on TV (page 4) that he thinks is boring?

Base +6