(C89) [ACID-HEAD (Murata.)] Hitozuma Hinata no Oku-san Komeya desu. (Naruto) [English] {doujin-moe.us}

Posted on 15 March 2016, 18:36 by: GC_Midnight

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Posted on 15 March 2016, 21:56 by: Person8

Thank you!

@wonderbread08 (and company)
Indeed, why are you, and so many others so mad, about it being "non-canon"? All doujinshi are exercises in disbelief, even when they have canon pairings.
Calm down and understand that it's pornography drawn by fans.

I will never understand why so many people are so invested and subsequently mad that a girl character they like is getting dick.

If you don't like it, go away.
Why would you complain when you freely knew from the tags this wasn't going to fulfill whatever fantasy you wanted, particularly about a "powerful" shonen protagonist doing something to save his waifu?

To you all, are you too young for porn, or too emotionally meek to let go of things that even moderately displease you (that aren't even real or canon)?
Embrace the Zen of doujinshi-dick, and either enjoy it, or move on with any booty-bothered rectum you might have. Good heavens, you don't see this sort of passive-aggressive fan faggotry complaining when ACID-HEAD draws Nami getting a million dicks for money.

@Loki
Brofist.

@CDub7888
You should take your own advice, since you're saying this is somehow a poorly made doujinshi from a very popular (and now vaunted pro-status) doujinshi circle quite simply because it has near nothing to do with the source material. Which it need not, since, you know, it's quite literally a fan porn-zine.

Last edited on 16 March 2016, 03:04.

Posted on 15 March 2016, 21:58 by: Imsolo

Wow. This is crap

Posted on 15 March 2016, 22:07 by: BurnItDown

Hey guys, remember the moon-smashing super ninja who helped KILL GOD!?

Imma rape his wife. Ain't I a genius?

Posted on 15 March 2016, 22:21 by: pusssu

thank you very much

Posted on 15 March 2016, 22:22 by: CDub7888

So...source material wasn't taken into consideration here, was it?

@Person8

If we're supposedly sensitive for criticizing the fan work, what does that make the defenders of the fan work towards such criticism? Just because it's fan-made doesn't exempt it from being of poor quality and, more importantly, criticism.

Also, "don't like, don't read" is one of the laziest responses ever and is essentially admitting that what you're arguing against has validity and you just don't wanna hear it.

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Posted on 15 March 2016, 22:23 by: dirtyhairry

ROLF, good thing Hinata looks weirdly off as fuck in this, page 1 especially. Much easier for me to consider that's not actually her, but rather her long-lost fat & ugly twin sister. xD

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Posted on 15 March 2016, 22:32 by: wonderbread08

I had a hard time suspending my disbelief with this one. Drug her, blackmail her, display greater skills of ninja shit or something!!!

Damnit! Why am I pissed over jerk off material?

Edit: @Person8
Did I ever say I was pissed at it being non canon? I just wanted more to go on with my netorare. Naruto, or not, I found the defeating of the female very weak in this one and it really bummed me out. Still jerked one out, but would have enjoyed it better if the story had a bit more effort put into. People will enjoy what they enjoy though. Just not my cup of tea.

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Posted on 15 March 2016, 23:36 by: Kinkiepie

This one is kinda weak and hinata looks weird a miss in my book for acid

Posted on 15 March 2016, 23:36 by: Anonymous777

Dat body tho.

Posted on 15 March 2016, 23:59 by: dragonfly82

10+ vanilla vs 1 NTR/rape doujinshi.

I would expect to see more cheating/rape doujinshi of waifu Hinata.
I guess even Japan really likes/respects married Naruhina,

Posted on 16 March 2016, 01:39 by: Loki The Flameshield

FINALLY! I have been waiting for a doujin where Naruto get's NTR'ed. Every other doujin is about Naruto either having happy sex or Ntring someone else, usually Sasuke. I think it is because they were the couple everyone wanted so long, because Hinata absolutely loves Naruto and he was just oblivious, while Sakura absolutely Sasuke, but he was a dick. This is why Naruto is so hard to ntr and Sasuke is so easy, but damn is it refreshing to see it happen to Naruto. I'm not saying I dislike the character, I'm just saying it is nice to finally see.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 02:01 by: Naruto0116

To be honest... I expected Sasuke to do this to Hinata just to fuck with Naruto for taking his girl in a different one.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 03:14 by: Ferds30

You'd think she would use her byakugan before opening the door lol

Posted on 16 March 2016, 03:42 by: Chen Nyan~

The blackmailing and NTR is meh.

But the art and facework is just.. ick.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 04:13 by: McRawr

This would have have been so much better if it wasn't some random guy.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 06:32 by: psicomenace

Absolutly wonderful, this is exactly what we have been missing all those months since the end of the manga, NTR of Hinata, we need more, so much more of this kind of doujins (I would love to see many doujins of Hinata being NTRed by authors like Takeda Hiromitsu, Carn or even Tamagoro), really thank you very much for this translation.

BTW, totally agree with you @Person8, I think the problem here is too much self projecting of some people...

Posted on 16 March 2016, 06:53 by: Kuro Tamashi

@ Loki The Flameshield, don't worry, Naruto is fucking every other girl at his office.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 06:58 by: Hinoron

So... it's a random manga covering the VERY much trodden ground of a deliveryman raping a housewife, except not bothering with any sort of pretext or triggering event or premise. Then we stick the head of a popular girl from a popular mainstream manga onto the housewife's body, in order to draw in Naruto fans to read it (and ideally purchase, in it's original format), under the mistaken belief that this was a Naruto H-doujin instead of one of the laziest H-manga trope regurgitations I've ever regretted reading.

If we'd got to the end and Naruto pulls off a hat and black wig, and we learned this was all just a young couple doing role play to spice up their sex life, at least there would have been a STORY here, and one that had more to do with Naruto than just forgetting to shade the housewife's irises..

I am angrier at the <strike>author</strike> <strike>creator</strike> guy who drew this garbage than I am at the guy who posted it, but nonetheless, I don't consider this worth sharing.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 07:23 by: asssde

the classic milkman

Posted on 16 March 2016, 10:37 by: Mishan

@Hinoron
or maybe the author is a fan of NTR. it's not that deep bro. People have fetishes that dont line up with yours. get over it. People want to see Naruto NTR. Some people want it to be total strangers.
Hinata has two kids with the dude and is happy. its just a fantasy. this doesnt change anything in canon. it's a damn fetish. stop projecting yourself onto Naruto. you act like hinata is cheating on you ffs.

And to those who ask "why didnt she fight back!>1.11??1" it's because the appeal of NTR (in my opinion) is that they inherently want to have sex. They aren't forced into it, just slightly coerced. It's not a rape fantasy where the girls are suffering. They secretly want it and just say 'no' as a pretense. If Hinata wanted to get away, she obviously would have. but thats the point; she didnt want to get away lol. and don't even act like the manga didn't set up NTR. Naruto always away at work... a lonely Hinata who hasn't had sex in who knows how long... it's really a perfect set up.

that said, can we get rid of the 'rape' tag. she's not being raped.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 10:44 by: Hecatom

Most of the time i wouln't complain about a ntr doujin (everyone is free to like what they want) but in this case i will have to make an exeption.
This right here is one of the reasons why i usually don't like most of the ntr stuff that is posted here, this right here is the quintessential example of generic shit that you can find.

With all the posibilities for a believable story on the narutoverse and the amount of characters that they could use, they go with the random guy rapes the house wife and this is enough to make her ok with it.
Is like the Rakudai ntr doujin, they simply ignore the characters and use them in the most generic setup just because, dunno about the ntr fans, but i like quality in my fetishes.
I am sure that i can even come up with a better story and a better setup for a ntr story on the Narutoverse if i wanted, i mean, we have characters that can manipulate shadows, create illusions that trap you for what it looks like ages when in reality it was just some seconds, not to mention the posibilities with stories like sending x or y female into a mission that goes wrong, orochimaru and his/her drugs, or characters and their summons, etc, etc, etc.

Hell, they could even use alternate endings for the last if they wanted, with Toneri winning.

And instead of all of that they basically go with the milk man.

And then you wonder why most people find ntr to be shit.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 10:48 by: Mishan

^ Entitled to the extreme. It's a simple porn doujinshi. You're not even paying for it but complaining. Insisting that people need to make a plot for work that they are hardly even getting paid for is just entitled. They are making this stuff in their free time for the public. Good lord. Expecting every Naruto doujin to have a plot is just absurd.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 14:59 by: Elios K

How does this even work? Doesn't Naruto gang bang Hinata all the time? What other use could he possibly have for his Shadow Clones? Even if he goes to work he could easily leave a clone. If Hinata is a neglered wife not getting enough D, then Naruto just isn't using his godly ninja powers right.

Posted on 16 March 2016, 19:24 by: Pairadocks

Man, this seemed less "Hinata" and more just some random chick. Like this could've been the same exact story with any OC.
Decent art at least, even if the girl only vaguely resembles Hinata

Posted on 16 March 2016, 20:02 by: Harada Yui

This was a surprisingly soft nerotare. For vanilla fans that couldn't stomach this, just think of it like this; the delivery guy is naruto using a transformation jutsu and decided to try a bit of role-playing with hinata.

Posted on 17 March 2016, 01:58 by: Chen Nyan~

Eh.. dat face.

Posted on 17 March 2016, 21:10 by: Snotnose9001

I am a big NaruHina fan, but I'm not gonna get mad over one NTR doujinshi. It's a drop of porn in a sea of porn.

Posted on 18 March 2016, 22:55 by: SlaskFittan

A lot of netorare doujins are made to troll fans, tons are made to just cash in on the overstayed netorare trend & it's rabid fans who treat the fetish as an godsend.

What I take issue in is the fact there's this mentality that if it exist it must have bbm/dilf & netorare doujins JUST BECAUSE!
The quantity over quality motto of netorare artist doesn't help either. The novelty has run out. Time to move on.

Posted on 19 March 2016, 21:06 by: Drax

So Murata is inmune to the Naruhina cannon effect eh??

Posted on 20 March 2016, 12:46 by: Hekamiah

seems fair, after all we all know that naruto have been dressing that salad

Posted on 29 March 2016, 03:38 by: justicechi

goddamn more people in the comments here ridin naruto's nutz than a sahara wataru doujin

Posted on 08 June 2016, 05:00 by: haruka13

*0* cervix penetration hinata

Posted on 24 June 2016, 01:54 by: Brian Boitano

Why are her right foot and shin way bigger than her left ones? (Page 13, top panel.)

Posted on 07 July 2016, 18:57 by: Ethereall

In this parallel universe bad guy always wins.
even if she was a the moon-smashing super ninja who helped KILL GOD's wife lol.

Posted on 03 August 2018, 05:40 by: ShiroHige Pony

I wish Murata make doujins of Hinata getting GangBanged by the whole Kumogakure Elite of Ninjas (Killer A, Killer B, and the rest of them)

But this is cool for now.

Posted on 03 February 2019, 17:14 by: Red of EHCOVE

RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/889489/c612062545/

Posted on 27 March 2021, 09:26 by: nephelim

it's shocking how many people missed the joke of it. The Hinata this artist draws is a closet pervert that is called a delusional masturbator because she has the wildest fantasies while doing it. In this chapter, she was obviously doing it when the guy knocked on the door and she started fantasizing about it which is why the guy is still knocking on the door on the last page. Go check out his other work and you'll see tidbits about this Hinatas delusions.

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(C89) [ACID-HEAD (Murata.)] Hitozuma Hinata no Oku-san Komeya desu. (Naruto) [English] {doujin-moe.us}

(C89) [ACID-HEAD (ムラタ。)] 人妻ヒナタの奥さん米屋です。 (NARUTO -ナルト-) [英訳]