If you notice any grammatical errors please let me
I got some comment's on the last one I did
but please tell me what they are so I can improve and make better translations for you all

Still i have come a LONG way since this a abomination: https://e-hentai.org/g/753287/d30c58a40d/
view at your own risk:D

This is really great...

but my only issue is, why did you downscale the image size so damn hard ?

( from the original 2000x3000~ res to 1200x1700 )

that is a very huge loss in quality.

aside from that, thanks for doing this.

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Hmm I would like to see Soma fucking them instead.

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Ugh. At least make it some nameless, faceless student. Ugly, fat, old inserts ruin everything

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I don't know if the two girls from Prison School are supposed to be hints of the next work, but please do it.

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Amazing, really thank you very much, I love the art style of this author, his voluptuous girls are just wonderful, I really want to see the Prison School feminine cast in his next book.

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Amazing work! Some artist tend to exaggerate the proportions of the characters to the point where they do not even resemble the original characters. However, your work does a great job of that and makes so much more tasteful.

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I'm interested in the names of the girls in the last page.

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pg 5 "I can't I refuse" => get rid of one "I"
pg 9: panty's => panties
pg 10 ojousama's => ojousamas
pg 25 pussy's => pussies, photo's => photos
pg 28 sprem => sperm

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So, can anybody translate his rape-books on the wall in that last page?

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Oh yeah, since you translated this one, just giving you a heads up that the sequel (At least I think it's the sequel) has been posted.

https://e-hentai.org/g/954756/336e498b3e/

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Gawddan Erina and Alice in bunny suits

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Alice needs more love! Shame there aren't many quality doujin with her.

Thanks for the translation! Keep up the good work.

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Girls are best unconscious

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