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This translation is... weird, as though the translator only half-knows Japanese and hasn't really spent any time in the culture. I mean, just looking at Page 4 alone:

Maki: にこちゃん、やけにテンション高くない？
Translated as: Nico-chan, you're not even feeling the tension?
Actual meaning: Nico-chan, aren't you getting a bit over-excited?
(’Tension' in Japanese doesn't *actually mean* tension, it means the level of excitement.)

Nico: だぁ~って、せっかくの南の島なのに楽しまなきゃ損でしょ？
Translated as: Particularly since we went to a lot of trouble to enjoy ourselves on these southern islands.
Actual meaning: Buuuut, since we took the trouble of coming to the southern islands, wouldn't it be a shame if we didn't enjoy ourselves?
(The particles of meaning are mostly there in the translation, but the translator doesn't seem to understand how the grammar operates to fit them together.)

I could go on, but I think you get the point I'm making and my dinner's getting cold. Don't trust Anon blindly, guys! I might be tempted to translate this properly myself, if you guys are cool with that - I'm a big NicoMaki fan and I have some time on my hands.

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This is really confusing, as a translation.

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https://www.doujinshi.org/book/813101/rely-on-me/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/849199/34014445ce/
Alternative English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/920112/8fa839a866/
Korean Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/851414/ea3cc6cdce/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/863644/93a8e4027c/

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