Why cant shemales look this good irl? Oh well thanks for the upload.

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Thanks for this.
Top notch artwork.
Decent storyline parody.
More strategic placement of the caption balloons would be my only suggestion.
The way they are now, in some panels they tend to be read out of sequence.
(In some panels they are read right to left, some are left to right, some are bottom to top, etc.)
Confusing.
Also, in most instances the "storyline notes" describing what action is taking place should be at the top of the panels.
Still, the artwork in this is better than many other offerings I've seen.
I'm looking forward to more of this so as to continue the story to the end..

Last edited on 03 October 2016, 10:32.

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