Very nice. I hope we'll get to see more like this in the future, the text did a great job selling it.
Base +6, TheAbominatrix -2
Posted on 14 February 2016, 12:03 by: Otaku_Man_84
Score +14
This was rather good! The dialog added so much to what would have been an otherwise simple but still sexy kisakae.
I would have preferred more "tests" though. Like alternate artificial personalities (other than the 'slave'), like human pet (dog &/or cat for example), mental age regression, or even a cliched one like dumb horny bimbo. Another amusing "test" could have been changing her emotions while she was still aware & thus making her simultaneously want & not want to do &/or say something outrageous like masturbating (with or without a dildo) while explaining how she both loves & hates what she's doing. Another minor thing I would have changed would be that her memories & original self were not erased but were shut down & sealed away so the new owner could have various fun altering or otherwise teasing/tormenting her. It just seemed a bit extreme to basically irreversibly mentally kill her when this MKII enabled mental & emotional control. It could have even "rebooted" her if she ever finally mentally broke down. They could have had all the "fun" they dared as long as she was not physically broken.
Sorry for ranting a bit. It really was quite good & I would really love to see more MC &/or Time Stop themed ones like it. Thanks for sharing!
Wish there was a "body control" tag. I'd also like to put an "emotionless" or "blank" tag but only "emotionless sex" is accepted but since there's not even any masturbation or grouping happening, that one just doesn't quite seem applicable.
Base +6, TheAbominatrix -2, Derpmanhurp +6, seba5609 +2
If you want any of my exports, ask for them in my galleries. :)
Base +6
Posted on 15 February 2016, 10:01 by: Otaku_Man_84
Score +6
@Rang0532 Sure! I've checked out your Mugi comic & would love to see more & others like it. It reminds me of an old 3D fan-made comic named "Saga of Love Slaves". It went for 4 good sized chapters but like so many others like it, was never finished.
@Otaku_Man_84 Whoever you are, you have a good taste if you liked that saga. :D Do you know about this kisekae game? If not, here's the link pochi.lix.jp/k_kisekae2.html If so, feel free to ask me for the exp of any character you'd like to make a story with (preferably a mc story).
@Rango532 Sorry for the stupid-late reply. I got hospitalized for a while a few days after you responded to my comment. I hope you'll see this sometime soon. I'll also post this on your latest gallery.
Anyway, I'm aware of the Kisekae game but was never able to use it all that well so I could never properly attempt anything besides some basic random fun let alone try to make an original story or an adaptation of any of my past stories and/or comic commissions.
I'm pretty good at writing & editing stories, at least. Besides making a few commissions of him, I used to help Jin/Jimryu with his English comics & even provided the original story to the Onegai Teacher comic in his 6th comic pack, however, I no longer have the artistic skills no "program" knowledge to deliver them like Jin/Jimryu & yourself. Perhaps we could consider trying a partnership of some sort?