http://minorutenshi.tumblr.com/

Can someone do a english translation for this?
Hm and I want to see what does happen to Sakura too.

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@Hanmac, it's full of grammar errors. I could do this, but the cleaning would be a pain in the ass.

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Art is bad.
Story is bad.
Grammar is bad.

This one truly sucks.

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what should i say the art, the Story is more than Bad
Naruto would never let Sasuke FUck his Wife and HInata would never Fuck with Sasuke

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Eh, if Naruto gets his woman taken, he deserves it. Not only did he flatout let Sasuke fuck his wife, he then takes off on a mission and leaves her alone with the prick. The fuck did he think was going to happen? That Sasuke getting his rocks off in Hinata would repair his relationship with Sakura?

This is why I hate these NTR type deals: they're all stupid. Some may say "It's just porn", but I've read plenty of hentai doujins and whatnot that are just as well written as any mainstream manga. Shit, a lot of them are actually BETTER, since they can deal with mature subjects without having to cater to the younger crowd. But NTR is the exception; the only way they ever work is when everyone but the wife/girlfriend stealer goes full-retard.

Since the artwork is crap, the only way for this thing to save itself was to have a decent plot. It doesn't. That said, I still want someone to translate this, just so I can get the full story from the dialogue. Obviously the characters are saying a lot, with speech bubbles taking up nearly half of any given panel, and I find myself genuinely curious.

Last edited on 03 March 2016, 20:14.

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Oh no... I'm not touching that...

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All I'm gonna say is that sometimes I'm surprised at how fangirls can sometimes out-do fanboys for sheer lewdness. Her PixIV is full of stuff that I wouldn't touch with a ten-foot pole: This comic, Naruto/Sarada porn, Boruto/Himawari porn? Nooooo thank you.

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very very good,i love hinata

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Is there an English version of this?

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I could actually translate it, but i don't know if anyone will want to make a typesetting for it.
Plus, it would mean keep reading this...
... stuff that tbh i just find bad both in art and story

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@Hecatom

I would love for you to translate this. Please do so.

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Muy buen aporte la artista tiene pasión y talento en tu historia y el dibujo, gracias por compartirlo

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There are too many vanilla Hinata stories. Hinata is really hot and a netorare story is nice for a change.

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Buen aporte. Sigue así

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English version - https://e-hentai.org/g/949165/89a9143499/

Well, chapters 1-3 at least :D

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