Maria VS Choi [New Version]

please comment for my devolop

is it your work? pretty good in general. just add some back grounds and color it... maybe some text. (why dont you try that they dont talk or get into their minds and simply have a fight commentator allthrouout that comic?

overall i find your drawing style is quite good. would have preffered more rape and maybe a bit less ryona but thats just personal preference. (i like my ryona a bit less brutal rougly around tokkuriya's level) https://e-hentai.org/g/574316/c4dc57b466/

i still really like that she fought hard... is just the sex was t too brief :(

Anyway really liked it, hope to see more from other characters like Mai, Athena, or from other games like chun li or Kasumi and Ayane from DOA.

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I like your work (if it yours), it reminds me of Poke:
https://e-hentai.org/g/714685/38ba0bdd9e/
I dont mind the lack of color. Loved the one with n. 18 the most, though the last part was just almost sketches. Just keep on keeping on.

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Thank you for your tips I'll take it for my skill

and I'm sorry for this Language my english is so weak, You can see it from this comment.

Last edited on 30 January 2016, 00:16.

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Called the police

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