I can't decide where to start on the critical commentary. Dialogue, the mspaint art style, actually using "snusnu" seriously, generic animal tribe pseudo-explanations...

Base +7, kingra1 +5, Veral +7, kikicholi -6, Imsolo -6

I like the story. But the artwork is terrible. I wish it was made from a different artist.

Base +6, n0sfreak +6, itsspherical +6, Imsolo -6

Page 3, last panel - Oh hai, Charlie The Unicorn. How's your sex laife? ^_^

Base +5, Imsolo +6

As far as Foxtide888's stuff goes, this is a marked improvement. I tend to shit all over people who upload their own stuff, but they're actually getting better.
It's still by no means good, and I certainly don't find it palatable, but they're getting better. I commend him or her for that.

Base +7, goldengaia +6, 11angenoir -3, Veral +7, Chained +6, Sheltem +7, Epion +15, Imsolo +6

I just wanna see how far this goes.

Base +7, i8246i -6

Illustrations are pretty crude but I like it

Base +4

You're improving. Keep it up and in no time you'll get better.

Base +7

Ah, the old invite a homeless woman into your home in exchange for sex but then she gets pregnant and you start a loving family with her story. Tale as old as time.

Base +6, Imsolo +6

我tm社保，，，

Base +16