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[Linkartoon] The Deal (Ranma 1/2) [English] [Ongoing]

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Posted:2015-11-22 01:27
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Posted on 22 November 2015, 01:27 by:   Ubersuntzu    PM
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Update: Added Page 12. Updated the prologue again with a clean copy of the background.

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Versión Española: https://e-hentai.org/g/875429/4d6ec1d924/
Posted on 02 October 2015, 11:03 by:   The Goat is Watching    PM
Score +1
I can't possibly imagine where this is going!
Last edited on 26 October 2015, 00:10.
Posted on 02 October 2015, 11:35 by:   Ubersuntzu    PM
Score +128
@The Goat is Watching

Happosai agrees to a reasonable compromise and everyone goes home happy without feeling cheated or exploited? Is that what you were thinking? >_>

@ Ilyia

The artist is currently looking for translators. He might choose to have the first 2 pages redone anyway. If the official version still has lots of grammar errors I'll just make a separate gallery with my translation in addition to the official one and at that point I'll redo the first two pages.

Edit: Okay, I went ahead and re-did them since Linkartoon is using my pages as the official release anyway.

Edit 2: Really gonna have to disagree with you. Sure, there are plot holes relating to what these characters would usually put up with (or not put up with) when you compare it directly with canon, but if anything it's still trying way harder to fit in with the official universe than basically any other Ranma hentai made within the last 5-10 years. :/

Every other new Ranma hentai basically amounts to "Girl Ranma is now a horny sex fiend who values penis more than honor." Likewise Ranma is usually sporting the same new voluptuous body as in this one only it's not even acknowledged as being a change. I've only seen one other hentai that came up with an explanation for giving Ranma J cups.

Also please quit downvoting Ilyia. He's a good commenter. :(
Last edited on 22 November 2015, 05:24.
Posted on 03 October 2015, 00:16 by:   ukshadow    PM
Score +114
>Happosai
Uuurrrrgggggghhhh. Nothing kills a boner faster. He is like the predecessor of all middle aged bald filthy fat men in hmanga.
Posted on 03 October 2015, 15:44 by:   umakeisee    PM
Score +81
My thoughts on seeing the cover:
Yay, Ranma 1/2. Oh god, not Happosai! He ruined the series!
Posted on 03 October 2015, 18:01 by:   Ilyia    PM
Score +25
Hello. If you want help with your English, I am sure there are a lot of people willing to help... I for one wouldn't have a problem with fixing it.

Edit:

@ Ubersuntzu

Could you redo the English of the first pages as well? I know that was how the artist translated them, but I'm sure he didn't mean for them to have poor English.

Also, I would however to ask the two people that downranked my comment what the hell they did so.

11angenoir -3
popioo1234 -6
alantupadre -6
qqasd21 -7

Seriously... don't these guys want the English of comics to be good?

Edit2:

I like the art of this story, I just wish the artist hadn't gone for the whole "lets make her ass and tits bigger" route. The artist loves Ranma-chan, so it always seems odd to me that he would actually change her. If he likes her, then there would be no need to change. Changing established status quo of how a character looks and/or acts, is killing the character IMHO.
I also wish he would have chosen some other character. Happosai kills the sexiness of any sexscene. Unless the reader is into watching a midget fuck a girl, it really isn't something that a lot of people will like. And then of course the story itself is OOC -- and I'm not talking about Happosai or Soun, but about Ranma. Ranma isn't the type of character that would ever give in to blackmail like this -- we even have canon stories that are somewhat similar to this where Ranma chooses to fight in other ways.

The Picholete Chardin story: Ranma become the bride herself, but instead of accepting the thing she beats up Picholete and challenges him so that she can undo what her father had done.

The Gambler King Story: Where Soun had lost the dojo -- Ranma plays the Gambler king to win back the dojo... and even when he continuously loses he still fights on.

And it goes on like that. What I am saying is that Ranma would never ever put "losing a place to live" on the same level as being raped by Happosai. Instead he would have booted Happosai through the roof -- given Soun a beating of his life and then told Soun to properly fix what he had done. And so it would have ended in some sort of weird fight instead.
Yes I know it is just a sex story and we are supposed to accept this so that the sex can happen -- but it still lazy story telling. You don't change characters like this just so that the sex scene can happen -- you need to actually let the characters own quirks play out in a way that it would happen naturally. One such way if the author wants it to be Happi, would be to have Happi get some sort of sex magic where he changes into his imagined young form and then in some weird fight ends up raping Ranma and by sheer force starts dominating her. Blackmail simply doesn't work with Ranma characters... even at the risk of losing her life or others being killed she would still have tried using some sort of trickery.

And that brings us to my last tidbit -- who is actually drawing this comic? The faces look like they were drawn by the artist so I think it is a collaboration ... but judging from all his other art there is no way in hell that Linkartoon drew this all by himself. So who is the other artist?

Edit 3:
Regardless of whether or not other doujin artists have the characters act in an OOC way, how does this excuse yet another artist to doing the same? In Linkartoons case he doesn't even have a page restriction count since he isn't selling this as a paper comic... Doujin artist are more often enough restricted by the time limit (wanting to finish their book for the summer/winter expo) and the cost of paper/printing. They actually have to make money from what they draw so they cut corners. Linkinartoons case there is no such restrictions.
But while we are at it... yes, I am indeed pretty fed up with artists making female Ranma a slut that pretty much never is a virgin.

Same thing goes for making Ranma's bust/ass larger -- even if most doujin artists do this, it does not excuse yet another person doing the same. That and in Linkartoons case, this guy is trying to emulate the original drawings as closely as possible... most doujin artists don't do this (save for KJ) so Ranma's proportions in those can be chalked up to lazy drawing style. Linkartoon went out of his way to make Ranma this way.
But I can't let that claim stand uncontested -- so I present to you some doujin artist that have drawn Ranma with a breast size pretty close to what she had in the manga and/or what she had in the anime.

buchimaru = https://e-hentai.org/g/775906/61e251bce5/
shimeta hiromitsu = https://e-hentai.org/g/649559/28869ca715/
ma-kurou = https://e-hentai.org/s/c9862812fd/705935-4

In Shimeta's case it would represent how Ranma was drawn in say the 2nd movie. (which was the largest she has been depicted as breast-wise)
In ma-kurou's case, it was just that frame (since she was pregnant in the 3rd chapter). Of course ma-kurou fails at other stuff, such as making her too tall compared to the other girls and not drawing any virgin blood. Wasn't she a virgin before the rape in that scene? Such utter failure from the artist. There is no point to a rape doujin if the girl isn't a virgin.
Last edited on 18 December 2015, 05:20.
Posted on 09 October 2015, 16:26 by:   valoix    PM
Score +23
Finally Happosai gonna bang Ranko!, there are tons of vanilla Ranma hentai with Ryoga, this gonna be great and unique.
Posted on 16 October 2015, 22:30 by:   averagejoe32    PM
Score +17
Was, curious when the update for this version was going to go out?
Posted on 19 October 2015, 17:35 by:   MARMIST    PM
Score -43
PLEASE NOT THE OLD MAN, PLEASE. PLEASE !

PLEASE, ONLY THE PANDA !
Posted on 24 October 2015, 22:24 by:   Boomerpyr0    PM
Score -20
should this be tagged with drugs or mind control?
Posted on 13 November 2015, 12:21 by:   cockslove    PM
Score -34
nothing sex
Posted on 29 November 2015, 22:12 by:   Malroth    PM
Score +14
Just give her the mind control potion already,
Posted on 13 December 2015, 16:50 by:   ubdu    PM
Score +4
I love it. The best in Ranma series ever. I always wanted to see ranma bonned by that old man Happosai using some dirty schemes of his . This is Great! The story's awesome so is the art keep up the good work :X
Posted on 17 December 2015, 07:42 by:   Sovietiko    PM
Score +3
Im also one of the few that wanted to see exactly this! He molested ranma since he first appears, groping, licking and all the good stuff. I was shocked that no one ever had done this. To see this done and with such good art is a pervert dream come true. For real, I googled for this exactly since I knew hentai existed.

Agreed, it would have been better if the autor had not included all the bigger breasts and ass on it. But meh, is not ourageous yet so I can deal with it.
Posted on 17 December 2015, 22:06 by:   Drax    PM
Score +8
It's me or this looks traced...

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