The main problem I have is that on page 3, she says "I lovED him".
At the time of this posting, we're only up to page 11, but the implications of that past tense is either that she DOESN'T love him anymore or that something happened and he's not around anymore. I'm hoping it's just an error on the writers part, otherwise this could get pretty depressing.
I really,really like this Doujinchi. Love the story to it,plus the art style...plus,dragons. Lol
Um..maybe for the next part, have the two dragons carry on what there doing,but have the three bandits take the rider behind some bushes or something and try to 'interigate' her.. The dragons 'finish' then the male one looks for her..
He spots the bandits,and fights them off and then him and the rider cuddle