Love all but the aliased text, looks like it came from paint. This seriously needs to be reworked with nice text in photoshop. Also 2 mb per page!?
Edit: Found the store if anyone wants to purchase some
http://www.monstrousdoctor.com/chainreaction/
A little expensive but in my experience the works that are made by separate writer and artist always end up being way better, sometimes you can't draw but you can write, sometimes you can draw and write pretty bad stories *cough* Milftoon Sometimes you suck at both! *cough* Y3DF *cough*
In case none of you have realized, the shitty text on this upload is because someone used a crappy setting when they ripped the PDF. The original looks great. I am tempted to re upload this in better quality... but I'm lazy.