>sample

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Why only a sample? I could understand if it was a brand new untranslated work and nobodies scanned the book yet but this is a translation with the source raw being here for quite a while. Is it still being worked on or something?

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@tkhang That's just the way it is. Great art = GREAT at crushing your heART. Some people like this.

Also, why the downvotes guys? He may be in the wrong room to speak out his preferences, but cut him some slack will ya?

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its only a sample because i dont have the complete script yet, 19 pages only, but i comissiond NOAH and will have the complete script by tomorow.
I will upload the complete story after the editing.
i wanted to share what i have done so far becuse its my first time editing and wanted som feed back.
and for those who like this book i can tell you that i comissiond and will upload the english version of the secound vol as well next week.

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these damm samples starting to flood the hole damm place

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Why do you hurt me so with this inadequacy, fam?

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3 more pages.

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Thanks for your work! Hope to see this completely translated.

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you want some feedback? okay

pg 1
how an ex...blah blah
fellfor should be two words

pg 2
ohh! I see
nudge a little to the left make it centered
huh
nudge left down
hmm, let me
put the is this? on the same line and nudge down
i-its german...
nudge down
wow, that's so
center that shit
m-mom's
don't put the s on a new line just make the font smaller

pg 3
it's way too hard for me
too wide change it to
it's way
too hard
for me
hehe, since
make font smaller
oh look at the time
center that shit
but... if I quit
make it fit the bubble
then you on it's own line and hard on it's own line (bottom)

pg 4
it's alright
put my life on the same line
but.. nudge down
ah... okay
see you same line, nudge down

got bored
in general center that shit

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Thank you! I really, really wanted to see this translated! As far as I know there are 3 of these stories right? Are you planning on translating those too?

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thanx for the feedback mathew1122, love your optimism and ill try to center that shit.
H_Neko only vol 1-2 is coming .

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