A manga created using Black Dog's works and editing.

wonandonlywon
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So... wait. This is a hacked-up version of existing pages from other black dog books like pearl jam 2, edited up with some redraws to make a "new" one?

I am not even sure what you call that. How do you tag it - rewrite and redraw tag both?

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i'll give it a fap either way

good job

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SUPER FLY+YELLOW TEMPERANCE+sex pistols+TUBULAR BELLS+?

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Better plot than some of his new works XD

Base +6, moemoeko +5, waltergeist -9

No rewrite deserves a rating that high.

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I see so many of BD works in here... not just various Sailor Moon stuff, but his onegai teacher works and others. Kinda like the maker took each favorite part and put it in here. The problem is just that its plain obvious when something is from his older doujins and newer i.e. in the newer she is way more voluptuous, different grain... It's also quite obvious that either the head or just the hair is pasted on another senshis or characters body and some of the new lines are really messed up (just look at picture 13, bottom right panel - the lines on hair and breast don't match by a mile). Also the footwear makes it clear which senshi it is on some panels.
But on some pages it kinda work and almost comes trough as new material. It's not like BD is not recycling his own work too (that latest mom & daughter is a trough and trough rehash in every sense). Not terrible, but could've been better.

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If you're going to rewrite you mind knowing how to spell the word "sure"?

Or most words?

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Where's page 53 taken from? I can't find it anywhere, unlike the others.
It's not Super Fly, Sex Pistols+, nor Yellow Temperance, Tubular Bells, or any other original with Mercury in it that I could find. The one before that is 1:1 from SP+, just with color.

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> >Where's page 53 taken from? I can't find it anywhere, unlike the others.

photoshopped image from SUBMISSION-SUPER MOON (16 page - https://e-hentai.org/s/d126fac05f/758942-16)

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今天看了一下这部作品,以前一直觉得这是无聊的二次创作,但是今天我承认它的价值,因为充满了爱.

Dear uploader
I like your rewrite very much，because I know you are so kind and want to share your love and idea with others
Thank you very much！

Last edited on 16 June 2020, 07:55.

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有没有人能汉化一下

有没有人能汉化一下

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