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Night of the Full Moon by animegothangel. (in progress)

Western
Posted:2015-08-25 16:31
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:1.96 MiB
Length:7 pages
Favorited:23 times
Rating:
41
Average: 2.89

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Posted on 26 August 2015, 01:18 by:   The Chronicler    PM
Score +19
The art style doesn't need TOO much improvement, but the writing does.
Posted on 26 August 2015, 02:21 by:   l4chuga    PM
Score +3
It feels like there are pages missing...
Posted on 26 August 2015, 04:45 by:   wafflesiobpib    PM
Score +12
@The Chronicler I disagree the art needs a good but of improvement, The anatomy is wonky (Look at how lopsided Luna's breasts are on the cover) the coloring is wildly inconsistent(heck luna's hair is just a copy pasted pattern), and the angles are awkward (look how tiny Luna is oh page 2) Oh and the last page's bottom is just a trace of another picture.
Posted on 26 August 2015, 06:40 by:   fogpet    PM
Score +12
Page 2, she's a straight up cyclops.
Posted on 06 September 2015, 03:45 by:   Sanogono    PM
Score +17
Did the postal guy enter the realm of Equestria?

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