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(C72) [Ito Ichizo Shouten (Ito Ichizo)] Otoko no Tatakai 10 -Onnanoko wa Natsu no Kemono- | Otoko no Tatakai 10 -The Girl, a Summer Beast- (Neon Genesis Evangelion) [English] [Maipantsu]

(C72) [伊藤一蔵商店 (伊藤一蔵)] 男の闘い 10-女の子は夏の☆ケモノ- (新世紀エヴァンゲリオン) [英訳]

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Posted:2015-07-23 21:58
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Language:English  TR
File Size:35.94 MiB
Length:39 pages
Favorited:111 times
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Posted on 23 July 2015, 21:58 by:   maipantsu    PM
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Here comes the very first one.
Two more to go!

tl: maipantsu
edit: SuperShanko
Posted on 23 July 2015, 22:49 by:   TheGreyPanther    PM
Score +62
http://www.doujinshi.org/book/53872/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/759663/d933620cc1/
Posted on 23 July 2015, 23:10 by:   Super Shanko    PM
Score +59
The power of teamwork makes all dreams come true.
Posted on 24 July 2015, 00:33 by:   Moonxstone    PM
Score +32
The Lewd Adventures of Uska
Posted on 24 July 2015, 05:04 by:   ChaddyManPrime    PM
Score -23
@ Maipantsu

They deleted the first one that was translated into English for some reason.

It was called Asuka's Pussy Kiss.
Posted on 24 July 2015, 05:51 by:   Not-Phen0xyethanol    PM
Score +18
This art is superb.
Posted on 25 July 2015, 05:51 by:   krunip    PM
Score +37
What the fuck am I seeing?
Posted on 25 July 2015, 06:20 by:   Zessu    PM
Score +4
wat da fug
Posted on 25 July 2015, 11:05 by:   jonhddd    PM
Score +6
Those eyes on page 4.
Posted on 28 July 2015, 07:54 by:   NorkasAradel    PM
Score +16
top artwork
Posted on 30 July 2015, 23:52 by:   captcarisma    PM
Score +22
Thanks maipantsu, really great work!
Posted on 19 August 2015, 23:27 by:   Slow Loris 256    PM
Score +2
This is great stuff, but I really wish it weren't censored.
Posted on 15 September 2015, 23:26 by:   Cridel    PM
Score +96
Ugh... the drawings are a bit weird. They look kind of weird, although there is anime that is also weird if you remember that one funny bit with that one boy who looks absolutely weird. It is was sort of like the Japanese version of Family Guy, one of the characters in the English Dub was voiced by the same voice actor as the English dubbed Android 17. So nothing is entirely wrong with that.

However... this isn't ideal tsundere stuff either. She is shown being mean to Shinji both in front of other people and in absence of other people.

Helga from "Hey Arnold" is who I consider to be the ideal Tsundere. She calls Arnold blockhead and treats him poorly in front of other people, but she has a deep crush on him and writes deeply romantic poetry to express how she feels about him.

That is Tsundere.

This story framework seems to lack the element of differentiation or bipolar likeness you are suppose to see from true Tsundere characters, in which they are really sweet and thoughtful, but due to certain situations (usually peer pressure) that prevents them from acting this way in real life in from of other people.

It is sort of like a tragedy story in which girl likes boy and is romantically in love with said individual, but there is a conflict of interest at work that prevents that love from manifesting.

So for Asuka, her menace would be her reputation as a strong person. In absence of other people, she would behave like a pure love struck woman eager to get Shinji's cock in her mouth at all cost.

Of course, Shinji is a completely different matter altogether. He is a deeply unlikable character as he lacks any redeeming qualities, thus making any tsundere bound between any character and Shinji is just ridiculous horse shit.

First, no character could be that horrible in real life. It is like making the worse person possible as a male protagonist.

You have to make a balance character at the very least. Yes Shinji could have some less redeeming qualities like he is cowardly, but he should be made to also have some redeeming qualities as well like he is thoughtful, considerate, knowledgeable, passionate, and aggressive as fuck when he is pushed. They should had made him become batshit crazy when he choked Asuka, "Hey... you like this don't you? I like it too when the life flows out of your body. Die for me Asuka! DIE FOR ME! AHAHAHAHAHA!"

That is dark, but it gives him more than just being a male woman. More of him showing assertion when he it comes to what brings interest to him like cooking or some sort of hobby. Otherwise it makes little sense why he is still alive. He would have to possess some sort of interest just to avoid suicide.

Sort of like a character without balance as a means give him some balance between aspects that can be positive and negative to his character.

He is passionate about Cooking. He is knowledgeable about a lot of things. But he does poorly in his school work because he has little interest to interact with other people. He is cowardly, not because he actually is cowardly, but because he doesn't like violence. This implies he doesn't avoid confrontation, he just doesn't fight back because of his beliefs. This would stress Shinji comes from a unique culture of Buddhism in utilizing passive aggression and restraint.

For self conflict, because is suppose to be key to how the evangelions can be used in combat, he is actually wants to be assertive and cruel. He has a deep sickening hatred towards his father. Which means at any point they should have him gazing maliciously at his father, blaming him for the death of his own mother and then leaving him the doors of a Buddhist monastery which would explain Shinji's disregard for conflict. Speaking in his mind, "I want you so dead." Even smiling when he hears his father might had died in an angel attack. At some point even goes so far as to kill his father with his own hands, which he does with Asuka's help.

This would also work to how Shinji and Asuka have an interest in each other. She actually strength is his conviction to avoid violence. She thinks he is enormous strong even when he doesn't throw a punch and allows whoever to beat the living tar out of him, because even in such cowardice he is actually standing in place demonstrating true strength.

You could say when she says she hates him, she really hates herself and admires him. She doesn't say this out loud except to herself, because she doesn't anyone to think she is weak.

This also makes Shinji and Asuka sort of like a Yen and Yang bit. She is bossy and actively assertive. Shinji is restrained and passively aggressive.

You see people like Evangelion normally because of its attempt to be such a grand story, also because of its hype.

They fail to see where its imperfections lie and what could make it even better or at least a complete story. So the writers just produce more characters and make it even less interesting than it originally was.

One thing I would had done is not to have made it a struggle of survival for mankind, but rather the struggle of the individual. Instead of having angels, I would have it be an experiment to reap rewards out of potential of humanity at the stake of the individual for the good of all people. This sounds similar, but there are no angels involved.

Instead what you have are monstrosities, which are along with evangelions using alien technology instead of whatever bullshit they had used in the series.

They make Evangelions to fight against what they could call Sin. Sin being mankind's foolishness in previously seeking to gain the power of Gods and concentrate on aliens in already possessing this ability in creating life on Earth.

Thereby, mankind is fascinating in ascending to what the elites deem to be their rightful place. Gendo Ikari being one of those elitists himself, who believes mankind's rightful place is among the aliens who have the power of gods.

So the take on this is to conquer sin through evangelions, similar to how in evangelicals believe you can overcome sin through the sole grace of God.

It is eventually revealed the sins were intentionally created solely to force young teenagers who suffer from strife or internal complications to continue to do so in an effort to extract a forced evolution in man to become eventually equal to gods, even though each attempt as prior stated just produces more sin.

This would be what the writers of Evangelion should have strive for.
Posted on 21 September 2015, 04:07 by:   Lewd Bird    PM
Score +24
@Cridel
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bME84U_-eSQ
I love you for this.
Posted on 21 September 2015, 04:29 by:   Hana-chan    PM
Score +5
Thank you Mr. Kobayashi, I have been enlightened.
Posted on 23 October 2015, 11:15 by:   MeFirst    PM
Score +9
wow this is pure gold! please complete the saga with 13 and 14, thank you very much!
Posted on 09 September 2016, 12:55 by:   neostar1    PM
Score +6
Wow, I never thought piggyback riding could be sexy. O///o

If only ichizo shouten included more butt stuff in his work.
Posted on 19 September 2020, 11:26 by:   魔仙斌斌    PM
Score +2
🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍

期待汉化,说起来评论都看不到了,真可惜,好孤独啊
Last edited on 22 October 2020, 14:01.
Posted on 07 March 2021, 01:12 by:   Kathpockey    PM
Score +6
ITS RE-UPLOADED BOYOS! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b_99AUgpgHg

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