group:murayamamon
artist:motaro
male:tracksuit
female:cashier gyaru hotpants netorare rape tanlines
misc: timestop

Commissioned by me Greatfortinbras
From:Ragged Translations

I love this time stop

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incomplete?

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"God damn normies" yep.

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Nothing about this was funny. 0/10 not Time Stop Man

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Man it's so rare to find a revenge Time stop porn where you don't feel somewhat bad for the victims!

This is definitely one of the more funny and justifiable ones.

Edit: Ok i'll admit i didn't read it all the way to the nurse part

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he gets mad about how they treat their customers but he never buys anything so he's not a customer

plus if he doesn't like getting made fun of for his haircut maybe he should get another one, it's not like he's permanently stuck with a dumb bowl cut

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Wow Karaoke dude is an asshole

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Ntr......?

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No its not incomplete only 2 chapters has been released besides an extra side story and came out after I commissioned this.

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Damn the next part seems it will be epic.

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Why do they always have to have a grudge on the world. Can't just being horny be a good reason enough to abuse power?

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TOKIO NETORARE

WREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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All this doujin did was remind me how much I hate normies so goddamn much. I hope the title "Fuck Normies" is both literal and figurative.

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A lot of them at least has the justification of him reacting to bullying, the poor Nurse didn't do anything though.... Lol

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Time stop genre doesn't seem to have any charm when there is no reaction.

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Hey why not continue story of page 16

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if he would stop time and read all magazines, they wouldnt be mad at him.

@Yossarian 762:
maybe the hairdressers are so disgusted by him that they wont cut his hair, and his mother sucks at cuting hair

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Incredibly funny! Waiting anxiously for more!

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Ok I have discovered that two other chapters are on DLSite but I don't know japanese and such I don't know how to access them since I would have wanted to commission more of this

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Ok the karaoke dude may have been an asshole, but his asshole didn't deserve that much.

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On the one hand this is hot af and some of the victims deserved it
On the other hand this kid is kinda annoying and I hope he gets BTFO somehow

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Personally, I think the Spiky-Haired Karaoke Dude deserved what happened to him.

Hes a triple (maybe more?) timing dude that's way too arrogant, I mean, he thinks that he can go out with at least 3 girls AND keep them all tied around his little finger (he might succeed with the more... love-stricken girls, but really, how long is he gonna last before some girl shanks him?)

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>fucking normies

Goddammit. Who translated this?

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> fucking normies
> kekeke
Who's the translator? /r9k???

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Would wish this wasn't censored to hell.

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Ch3 https://e-hentai.org/g/1364324/890445a557/?p=1
Ch4 https://e-hentai.org/g/1378035/10ed3f4bb9/

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