Spa: http://g.e-hentai.org/g/827586/d8f72a52dd/

I came here for black metal...I'm pretty disappointed

Base +4

This is so bad we should put it up with that awful Gumball comic in a "what to avoid doing" section.

Or a hall of shame. Those are fun too.

Base +3

Hi!
I am Otakon, the drawer of this comic (and others).
Excuse me for do a bad job in this comic. Also excuse me for my english.

Autocritique.
- The anatomy: I must work more in the proportions. I see fails that I didnt see them before in the production.
- The planning of the comic: Begins well in the first pages, less the page 2 with those arms of Shadow... The orgy must be more intensive. I see it bored.

These are the fails that I see to myself.

All critique is welcomed. =)
See ya.

Base +5, Lapbunny +6

You should work on color consistency and clean up when using the blush effect. People don't get bloodshot eyes from blushing, but the spillover of the effect onto the eyes makes it appear as such.

Base +3