Encore une traduction bien merdique.

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C'est clair entre les fautes d'orthographes et les oublis de trad la franchement XD reprend le

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A mais la c'est vraiment abusé ^^', c'est clairement du google trad le truck !

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MES YEUX !!

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Effectivement, y a de la place pour de l'amélioration :/

Sinon pour les curieux, une version française un peu plus soignée existe chez la Oasis-Scantrad : http://www.oasis-scantrad.fr/V4/doujin-64.php

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I can't speak for the quality of the French translation, but I can say that the Oasis-Scantrad version was more liberal in wording, but it's obvious since even the English version was mistranslated in it's own wording, while this one was at least using a more accurate Jap-Eng translation as the basis.... Now whether the English to French translation of this is up to par is not for me to decide. I'm just commenting on O-S. ^_^

Most accurate translation from original Japanese: https://e-hentai.org/g/241832/2e06ce37a7/

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/238177/SOIX3/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/71847/aea08ca7b7/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/606143/6db424cab9/
English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/78677/8ca2d3a869/
English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/241832/2e06ce37a7/
English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/386362/0a65710942/
English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/404487/a665dcc46c/
Alternative French Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/266659/fd3737f673/
Spanish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/355214/8e74c18f8e/
Portuguese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/113596/9fada892e3/
Portuguese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/177276/2a9f4a2efb/
German Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/406822/22bdb54509/
Italian Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/717678/0a04468b14/
Polish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/470201/21c9bb25a5/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/385505/f51659dc67/
English Rewrite: https://e-hentai.org/g/275750/a8a5dc4e24/
Italian Rewrite: https://e-hentai.org/g/384775/d85a9ac3c7/

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