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Hm. Feels... rushed? Like each Case should have been its own story instead of cramming all 3 into one doujin.

Last edited on 27 May 2015, 02:38.

Base +9, Zakuzelo +9, KrystalKross23 +4, mikecd199817 +3

It should be "worms" instead of "insects". Insects have six legs and three body sections.

Got to agree with imercenary; it felt rushed. Also, these have been done to death, so they really need to be more inventive to get shock value.

That being said, the art was great, and I think with a bit of storyboarding and creativity, this (these?) could really shine.

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Succubus Fate is best Corrupted Fate.

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The meat took Fate's meat and combined it with other meat to create new meat.

Wow, this author really likes meat.

Base +6, N04h +29, Ficfactor +7, jeren_sky +14

The first story is a lot more violent than the narrative lets on, maybe because the writing (not TL) is so cruddy.
It's not like her blood was pumped out of her with a needle, she was literally got her liquefied internal organs, everything she had inside her skin, vacuumed out of her body.

While it's : "Oh noes! He is sucking me dry!"
It should be more like : " (%)%###@*(@#)!_!!!_+)@$@ "

Not that I'm such a sadist for wanting such a thing.

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