First part of my newest story - My Demons
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This is different. I like it.

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Nice!!! Love it!!!
I just hope the guy will turn into a demon or a futanari too!!! It's just not fair for the girl to be a powerful demon!!!

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This is great

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Would love to see more!

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love this! more plz ;3

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More is coming soon :3

Last edited on 24 April 2015, 10:08.

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A little sketchy, but the messiness actually contributes to the messiness of the scene. While I normally like colored stuff, I think I might actually prefer this black and white. The tf is well paced, and everything looks so so fun

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Hello, I'm that guy who complaints about Corruption.
I agree with Nack, although I personally hate coloured stuff. They make it a little bit TOO easy to read.

Some nice stuff: I usually don't read western submissions, but man -- this one was pretty nice, it has its own style and it's pleasant to go through,
Arguably less nice stuff: but, In terms of corruption, it gets a C+. It's too bad she "fell" so abruptly, her state of mind changed way too quickly from being bottom to being on top, from being a bitch to being the alpha. Quick personality switches like that are a bit of a turn off, it feels like there's no substance or depth to what's transpiring -- if she can turn into a maniac demon within a split of a second like it was nothing, surely a random god can appear out of nowhere and purify her just as quickly. Catch my drift?

For the author : Actually elaborate upon the process of corruption, put up some text between scenes, show us how the individual's mind changes from rejection to acceptance through monologues and their actions. That girl became a horn-dog way, way too quickly. It's not even like her mind-snapped too quickly, tbh, but that her nature was already that of a lewd creature -- being turned into a demon only empowered that side of her.
In terms of corruption, that's not very interesting. Corruption is especially interesting when there's friction, when there's a conflict for control -- where one struggles to maintain their sense of self, but slowly begins to forget who they even are. Without a sense of self, they easily accept any role their assailant assigns for them.

Last edited on 03 May 2015, 01:58.

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Hello, thank you for your comment.
Just wanted to say that this was never suppose to be a corruption story.
The person in stock is not being corrupted, she gets possessed.
I do understand the idea of corruption and i promisse when ill draw a story about corruption ill try to make it satysfying to you :)

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This appears that it should have the shemale tag instead.

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