Pages 1-4 I was like "oooh this is looking good", then the last panels of page 5 make me go "wut?".

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This is cool, but makes no sense. Even by porn standards. And I hope it continues.

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The question I have right now is "...ok, and then what?"

This is leading up to something, but what exactly is it leading to?

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I think this could be brought back to page 4 and could continue, hell you could use the top three panels of the 5th page and continue from there. Like go ahead and end it off with the taping of themselves together but more substance is needed for me to get my grove on with it

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I like this set up, if the blonde was a boy and there was penetration this would be perfect. IMO

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If nobody come to collect the "gift package", then it feels incomplete. But maybe it is.

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How'd this get here >.> . I had a chat with the guy who commissioned it, probably wont continue.

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Ok, ok looking nice, I like where this is going..oh.

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