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[TheViktor] Random Encounter (WIP)

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Posted:2015-04-17 18:03
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Language:English  
File Size:242.8 KiB
Length:1 pages
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Posted on 17 April 2015, 18:03 by:   TheViktor    PM
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A new short comic I am making and will update eventually
Posted on 17 April 2015, 18:28 by:   ArchAngelrc    PM
Score +28
"and will update eventually"
Then please start posting it, once it has at least 1 real page, and not just a cover that says nothing about it, other then furry.

Edit: Nice comic, like it.
Last edited on 21 April 2015, 00:34.
Posted on 17 April 2015, 18:39 by:   TheViktor    PM
Score +58
Okay, maybe I should be more clear about it sorry. What I meant to say is that it will be updated very soon, maybe even this week but I can't guarantee it. The whole comic is sketched up and I just need to ink and put in lettering and such but real life and other stuff is tough now
Posted on 17 April 2015, 20:00 by:   gasman212    PM
Score -24
@artist, as long as it's not yaoi, transformation, or mlp it's all good. i like your draw style.
Posted on 19 April 2015, 15:10 by:   TheViktor    PM
Score +22
Alright so I have posted the first page, and was gonna post it daily but this whole replacing gallery thing is rather redundant so I will post it as soon as the comic is done which should be in this upcoming week. Enjoy
Posted on 19 April 2015, 17:49 by:   imcatmo    PM
Score +4
Cute cover!
Posted on 19 April 2015, 19:23 by:   wafflesiobpib    PM
Score -3
the cover might actually be better than the contents from how this looks so far.
Posted on 20 April 2015, 05:44 by:   sonicblade13    PM
Score +11
seriously why are so many people leaving semi rude comments?

edit: by semi rude i mean something that could if said a certain way be rude or just straight out rude! i mean seriously ive seen crappier stuff then this get nicer comments so what the hell is wrong with it?
Posted on 20 April 2015, 11:13 by:   away1213    PM
Score +22
oh god that neck on page 1. he's gotta be like part owl or something.
Posted on 20 April 2015, 23:00 by:   Blake81    PM
Score +11
So, you got inspired by Rock & Gnolls? Nice! Although now I sorta feel like there should be more like Skye. Maybe she has sisters, hehe.
Posted on 21 April 2015, 00:21 by:   AnimusNocturnus    PM
Score +19
Well... you've got potential.The characters show emotions, even if those seem to be a bit over the top at times. Your facial-design is refreshing and I hope you keep practicing, so that it stays more constant during a comic (in some of these panels the faces seem to get a bit more out of shape than necessary for showing emotions). Story-wise it's an old hat, but let us be honest: We're not here for the plot. Which brings me to the "secondary plot"... dude... take your time. Consider how the flow of panels creates the illusion of time passing. You should also try to show your characters at the peak of a motion. We all get that Skye took off her clothes right before the 3rd panel on page 7, but it would have been much smoother, if you would have shown her unbutton in the 2nd panel or shove her mantel down from her shoulders in 3rd panel. And last but not least... let them be at it a bit. It's not a race and your readers should not get the impression of it being one. Consider using smaler panels which show a detail-view of a action that is performed and your characters focus on. Skye begins to blow Eldric on page 8... it would have been totally justified if you'd have focused a smaler panel on her lips going down his shaft. Also... it's a crass break from panel 5 to 6 on page 8. A smaler panel with maybe even just speedlines indicating swift motions would have smoothed it out a little bit.
Posted on 23 April 2015, 22:48 by:   MSTGMA    PM
Score +7
Pretty nice. Like your art style. Keep up the good work!
Posted on 26 May 2015, 23:31 by:   k0lt    PM
Score +1
I registered just to say: Nice.

Especially like the pose on the cover page. Very cute.

Good comic......especially the truth about some folks in pick up groups XD

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