Commissioned by: Dynellen
Translated and edited by: desudesu (http://desudesu.fakku.net/)
Raw by: qazmlpok

Do support my bounties.

I love factory tours, so educational.

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This was a really excellent edit english-wise, in the phrasing and grammar. A few little "oop" mistakes like missing spaces, but.

I admit desudesu has never especially stood out to me above any other group, but this release does.

[EDIT]: @wavedash - You can. Editing your own writing is, by its nature, highly prone to oversight, but that is what the process of rephrasing and refinement is part of - editing. People even hold seminars and workshops on this for aspiring authors, who may not yet have access to a talented editor. Regardless, my use of "edit" here is simply shorthand for "final edit" or the final work result.

I do not know the process desudesu uses in its translations. I simply wanted to show my respect and appreciation for the work we were given to read.

Last edited on 11 April 2015, 18:06.

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sypha: t-thanks, senpai.

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KITAAAAAAA

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I've been waiting for this.

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look at those boobs

look at those tentacles

look at those face

nice f** material

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very good ~

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@sypha

I'm pretty sure that no h-manga or doujin script has ever gone through editing (the "editor-in-chief" kind of editing, not the typesetting kind of editing). Standards are so low for hentai translation, as low as the bar for entry, that no one cares. And no, you can't edit your own script, just like you can't QC your own project, or be the best man at your own wedding.

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Well, I never thought the pandain doujins were about tentacle breeding. Nice factory tour.

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@Martz totally read that in Aki voice

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Well, did not really expect for this to be ever translated, so thanks.

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Consensual tentacles. I approve.

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A funny thing.
BTW, she's Komeiji, not Koumeiji.

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I want a sequel where all the "domestic" tentacle creatures suddenly go out of control and rape their owners.

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