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Last edited on 14 March 2015, 09:17.

Base +24, shonya6 -6, plester -5, Paizurikin -8, wavedash -14, Btech Thor -16

Sorry, not a good cleaning attempt here. The color pages are just covered over in white, there was no attempt to actually make the bubbles look natural. No attempt was made to cut the black bar that were left over from the scan. Also, there was no attempt to redraw the floating text on page 19 that's very likely important to the story. If you want your work to be taken seriously by the community, you need to step your game up.

Base +18, @43883 +30, shonya6 -6, junhezhin +8, ew53 +5, plester +5, Dammon +28, strayblue +8, shinangels +18, ongokakashi +6, wavedash +14, Isolation_Q +5

The chinese gallery was probably used as a source:

https://e-hentai.org/g/795191/0665e51d03/

Base +31