Hello everyone!! I´m Hao and this is our first translation JAP-ENG i hope you like it :)
Also, please read the disclaimer in page two...
Translator: Hao
Cleaner, Typesetter: Amante_Anime
We got the raws from here: https://e-hentai.org/g/629363/dee3f038b0/
And if you want DD Links you can found them in the blog: http://haoscanlationsrepo.blogspot.com/

Never a good sign when the first typo is on the first page. It's not actually a terrible job for a first time, but it does read pretty awkwardly at times. You might want an editor to look these things over first.

Base +7, GuroLover12 +9, LoneHero33 +7, LegoArielFanMaster +8, Kuro Yuuki +4, Bisharp96 +4, kobatochandaisuki +5, kebab4you +6, phangtonk +6, psy123 +7, cannske -7, Light_Dragon +7, Abarrow +5, and 5 more...

For the typesetting, try using a font that doesn't have a weird apostrophe (the symbol ') and use something like Akbar for the tildes (the symbol ~). Futari Wa Pretty Anon has some excellent font guides.

Someone definitely needs to proofread these, or at least correct the grammar. I'd do it but I'm on mobile right now. Maybe later if I have time.

OP, where are you from? I'm curious.

Base +12, Kuro Yuuki +4, VagrantAlucard +5, Abarrow +5, snipes1 +6

gussari kita aaan
gussari = a lot, oodles
kita = to drill
aaan (a moan)

Onii-chan's penis is going in so deep so fast aaan

Base +4, kurono -8, The Naughty Shrink +6, jsnormandy +10

@Llamakid yeah, but i have not proofreader for english so i expected that a good samaritan could help me, that´s why i release it this way...

@HerpaDerpMan we will check the fonts then to adjust this details, btw: from Mexico

@Theoldman i see!! i´ll modify it with this thanks!!

Base +6, Sancho_Panza +23, phangtonk +6, Spartn118 +6

"The penis is coming at full speed"
Gotta love these first timers sometimes.

Base +6, Nitramy +6, Someoneiknow +6, snipes1 +6, Bob123458 +6, Akatroj +8, jsnormandy +10

"Thanks for you compression" lol.

Base +8, Akatroj +8

Page 4, the last sentence is repeated, it's very rare to see that in manga (had happened) but a common mistake. Also, in the spanish release, same page, it's "Me di cuenta [de] que ya..." as a general norm, but I'm aware that some countries have different rules.

At the beginning you might want to re-read averything slowly after finishing, ganbare ^^

Base +5

Still better than Laruffii.

Base +8, The Naughty Shrink +6, JahvaM +5, Nitramy +6

This is fucking great. You never see Hentai like this.

Base +1