[Akatsuki souken] The bully part 1 + 2 [rewrite footloverd] [english] [FULL]

Posted on 21 February 2015, 00:12 by: Footloverd

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i hope you enjoy, if not it ok. i upload for people that want it.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 01:34 by: Paizurikin

I'm not trying to hate on you footloverd, but I really don't think many people here want rewrites.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 01:58 by: Footloverd

yes i know, but one or two want so i do it for them, i dont mind other people looking at it. I dont mind getting downvote or low rating for the people that want it.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 03:18 by: boarbaque

I'm sorry to disappoint you, but literally not one person wants this. You're pretty much just shitting over the creator's work

Posted on 21 February 2015, 05:44 by: jellypicnic

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Last edited on 13 October 2018, 16:09.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 10:33 by: Shamshiel298

You've jumbled the original panel order to fit to a poorly written, 'grammar bomb' laden rewrite script. This garbage lowers the quality of an otherwise remarkable site that you seem to have less respect for than your own menial search for praise by posting these second rate imitations of actual, skillfully produced scanlations. REAL Scanlations. Please stop.

If you REALLY want to clean and typeset pages, there are no end of shoddy scanlations on this site that are already very well translated and just poorly put together waiting for someone to come along and fix them. Learn to do the actual work and spare us any further of these desecration to great hentai artists.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 15:24 by: Footloverd

thank you jellypicnic i try best.

Shameshiel, i sorry, i try to make own one up, i'm very sorry, i wont post anymore. I very very sorry.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 15:55 by: jellypicnic

I like your writing Footloverd! Please continue to post! If you're not going to post anymore (I wouldn't blame you after how you've been insulted), please at least message me if you do anymore work using Akatsuki Giken. I'm always interested to see it!

@Shamshiel298
"Lowering the quality" of the site is entirely subjective. Akatsuki Giken gets very, very little attention relatively speaking. It's very nice to come into the tag and see that someone is trying to contribute their perspective. It's not as if he were preventing anyone else from translating or typesetting it; he's just producing what he finds erotic, the same way that Akatsuki Giken is. In that sense his "grammar bombs" are analogous to the ridiculous proportioning that so often turns people away from Akatsuki Giken's figures.

I've been a fan of the artist's work for more than 6 years now, and nothing that Footloverd has done "desecrates" it. I would say that he has more respect for this site than you do, as he is actively contributing in an artistic sense while you just toss around angry judegements like your perspective on rewrites is new and not just the same bullshit people always post in an effort to feel superior.

Please stop pretending you represent the interests of all users on this site: you don't.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 16:05 by: Footloverd

thank you, it always make me happy to see someone care, i try to make some for who want, but i not post it on here.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 16:21 by: PokeNirvash

While I appreciate some sort of English translation, an accurate one would be much appreciated. Not just for this, but for all of Akatsuki Giken/Souken's works. But mostly the latex ones, because that's my thing.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 21:28 by: founoe

Son of a bitch, do we have another Laruffi on our hands or what?
Fuck this guy.

Posted on 21 February 2015, 22:27 by: Footloverd

dont worry i stopped, i have original translation for akatsuki giken, but I can't upload them without permission.

Posted on 22 February 2015, 00:40 by: Hellwalker1221

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Posted on 22 February 2015, 01:45 by: Footloverd

thank you so much friend, it also makes me very happy to see people like my rewrites, but a majority of the people not like it. I will do requests but i not publish it as many people dislike it. thank you very much again dear friend, you've made my day.

Posted on 22 February 2015, 07:37 by: Firesstorm

I usuali don like rewrites but this time i heve no complains, it's very good. i have year's following to akatsuki and is very sad the hard that is find works un english of him.

Posted on 22 February 2015, 15:58 by: Footloverd

ty, I'll do cleaning akatsuki giken after this, so anyone who translate text can add them. ty for support.

Posted on 22 February 2015, 16:15 by: Hellwalker1221

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Posted on 22 February 2015, 16:45 by: Footloverd

i post on mediafire friend, and then you will have a week to download :). before remove. I love your enthusiasm :P.

Posted on 22 February 2015, 22:57 by: Hellwalker1221

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Posted on 23 February 2015, 00:27 by: Footloverd

that alotxD, but i try my best friend.

Posted on 23 February 2015, 01:02 by: DJjames

Does anyone really like rewrites? Bad grammar and poorly put together ones, at that.

Posted on 23 February 2015, 05:13 by: Hellwalker1221

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Posted on 24 February 2015, 00:11 by: alkanos1234

In the end of the day, its better than looking at the mumbo jumbo japanese text. Time to fap, and thanks.

Posted on 27 February 2015, 16:50 by: deathmagnetic

sooo what is the exactly order of the pages i have like 3 of this in different order

Posted on 27 February 2015, 17:10 by: Footloverd

The original one released was thought to be incorrect by urtecho, so he posted an original and a differetn version
check here : https://e-hentai.org/g/784118/73364325e1/ it might need some improvemnt but think it right it look right.

Posted on 03 March 2015, 04:12 by: TotalRookie

Eh, I didn't like it too much.

Is this your first time trying to translate, or rewrite?
If so, give it some work.

I may not like it, but it seems that people do, so you might improve over time.

Posted on 06 September 2015, 15:44 by: superdeath

Dude what the fuck? i thought this was awesome, but then when i saw the original, it seemed to me that you took so much stuff out, I thought this was the translated version but I was wrong. You just litterally moved the pages around and taking pages out to fit your dialogue.

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Posted on 02 August 2016, 18:02 by: mayhem086

Footlovered thanks! Hope you do more!

Posted on 23 September 2016, 23:11 by: hisokalovesmom

thx for the translation. I can fap a ton to akatsuki sluts! Great work!

Posted on 09 December 2016, 17:01 by: jfragrettel

Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

Posted on 31 January 2019, 22:26 by: theboredotaku

2015 wow this was ages ago, look the grammar was reaaaly bad and cringy, but i still fapped to it and i mean personally i have an open mind and low bar so i enjoyed it <3

Also JellyPicnic was so right, any new akastuki work is needed, any new translation is needed, any REWRITE is needed. so you people crying over the shit grammar would rather not have ANY new english akatsuki over badly rewritten akatsuki? lol

thanks for doing this and enduring the rough criticism FootLoverd!

Posted on 23 December 2019, 01:01 by: Jimbot Indroid

Best of the best comic, I really really really love her & I really really really want to fuck her all holes+gigantic boobs :D

Posted:	2015-02-21 00:12
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Language:	English RW
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Length:	39 pages
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language:	english rewrite
group:	akatsuki souken \| akatsuki giken
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