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[shia] Pussy Stars [Ongoing]

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Posted:2015-01-29 22:17
Parent:771347
Visible:No (Replaced)
Language:English  
File Size:1.30 MiB
Length:6 pages
Favorited:113 times
Rating:
105
Average: 3.92
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[shia] Pussy Stars [Ongoing], added 2015-10-14 13:13
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Posted on 30 January 2015, 08:06 by:   maradeth    PM
Score +20
I think I get the jist of how she ended up with the redhead, but this comic is a little hard to follow on one read-through, took me a second time around to start to follow it.
Comedy is a bit off and fast passed, the punchlines need a bit more setup.
Pages 4 and 6 are perfect, page 2 needs to be reorganized to flow a bit better, page 5 was more or less fine but there was little to no lead into the fact that... um 'sloot' was broke, and the joke lacked impact.
As for page 3... well, while it was organized fine and the flow of the page was good, I didn't quite get the joke, but that's more of a personal thing.

Over all I think the strip has potential, the author needs to pace things out a bit and keep an eye on how they organize each page. Until the author gets the hang of those pointers, and possibly read over some other strips to adapt some jokes/humor I'm afraid continuing this strip will end up being a labor of love with little to no reward.

Hang in the Shia, I'm looking forward to some improvment
Posted on 01 February 2015, 21:34 by:   Bastogne    PM
Score -1
Sorry,
what does it means "gunna"?
Posted on 05 February 2015, 21:59 by:   Empress_alkaid    PM
Score +33
Ew it's Mey Mey =
Posted on 15 February 2015, 01:11 by:   Gitami    PM
Score +3
Seems to be short for going to verb. He's gunna kill us! Won't work as He's gunna London.
Posted on 03 April 2015, 03:29 by:   RasenganRage    PM
Score +38
If those aren't Egg whites, what are they?
Posted on 05 September 2015, 20:34 by:   Drunkfu    PM
Score +3
Thanks for your input Maradeth!
Posted on 14 October 2015, 17:21 by:   Foxeye    PM
Score +6
For people thinking that this is a continuous comic, it's not. Each one is a short 1 page comic that's become a series called Pussy Stars.
Posted on 15 October 2015, 10:58 by:   Monkey D. Law    PM
Score +7
i spy a pregnant watermelon
Posted on 05 January 2016, 21:39 by:   bob46    PM
Score +42
RasenganRage - her jizz.
Posted on 11 February 2016, 19:27 by:   Thud    PM
Score +14
Slutty cats make surprisingly poor room-mates.

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