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The color pages here are edited quite poorly, even worse than what you'd expect from a fan translation. Just comparing these two pages:

https://e-hentai.org/s/cf44cbf0e8/779447-9
https://e-hentai.org/s/af5a1be6eb/601125-10

All the text is black in the translation, while the original has three or four font colors.
Most of the redraws for transparent bubbles are completely ignored. The "transparent" bubbles in the bottom center panel look ugly, they're not even the same shape as the original. The text in those bubbles is way too small, as well.
One moan bubble is even ignored, presumably because it would look way too bad if you were lazy and just filled it in with a solid color.
Vertical text is really unprofessional in general, though this is a pretty old release so I guess that's kind of excusable. Standards in scanlation have gone up.
Also they didn't even completely crop the page, there's still white remaining on the right border.

Really disappointing as an official release. :/

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Not even ntr, just sluts and lots of sex. Approved.

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Thank you for the translation and please don't listen to wavedash. If he is a translator, he should know to be less critical and more constructive. If he isn't, then he should shut up.

I went thru the entire translation and thought it was very good.

If he has so many issues with how it was edited, nothing is stopping him from spending the time and/or money to do it "properly".

That's what I find most funny about rants. It's the one's who don't put in the effort that complain the most.

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HOLY SHIT ITS FINALLY TRANSLATED THIS IS GONNA BE A GREAT WEEKEND AFTER ALL

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@ Dime145
You can edit for fun, because you like it, you are just a fan, yada yada, but you have no right to bitchslap with letters the author's art. It is hard enough for him that we can see this for free. Show him a bit of respect.

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@Dime145 Consider that it's an OFFICIAL digital release. A company paid money to an actual studio/company to work on this. So it's pretty normal to expect some level of quality from something that wasn't edited by a random guy on his free time in the basement after work.

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@Dime145 Sorry but you're missing the point, this is a leaked official translation. It's not a fan translation or anything. It should be handled better, especially the redraws.

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>Page 206

D-D-DICKSLAP!!
Nothing spells awesome like dickslapping someone in the wrong.

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Last story is really cute though.

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I was hoping there would be some continuity but then she lost her virginity for the second time.

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The hentai literally.

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the one with the teachers was so sweet, I got a cavity.

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That Kamen Rider Blade video at page 218. The scene and dialog doesn't match, but it's a surprise to see Kamen Rider meme here.

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>page 126
>ballet
This is an official translation and they couldn't even understand that was supposed to be "volleyball"? What a bunch of fucking scrubs!

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Wow! I, finally, read this, and I am glad I did. I didn't know that I prefer big cocks ramming tight pussies and anuses. Minus the rape, or apparent rape, I enjoyed this tankoubon. Thanks to whomever translated this and thanks to Dynellen for uploading this piece of art.
On another subject, Dime45 must have said some nasty shit to get his comment erased. Personally, I think comments should stay unless they are racìally devicive or are in some other form seriously harmful to persons. I'm really sad I missed it.

Last edited on 15 October 2017, 06:34.

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