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THE PAINTER

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Posted:2015-01-22 04:47
Parent:778270
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Language:English  
File Size:12.91 MiB
Length:80 pages
Favorited:10 times
Rating:
107
Average: 1.62
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Posted on 22 January 2015, 04:47 by:   mirageot    PM
Uploader Comment
My latest comic, still being worked on, currently. All my art in done on my Nintendo 3DS XL.

Mirage
Posted on 15 December 2014, 11:29 by:   IvanGo    PM
Score +146
don't expect any good rating - such things are not valued here.
your problems are:
1) style is too specific
2) too few patterns - in manga pictures are placed more chaotic, not table-style.
3) no backgrounds
4) most pics - just faces, no furnishing, no figures
5) very few foreshortenings
Posted on 31 December 2014, 05:24 by:   test12932930    PM
Score +76
i hate to see any artist discouraged but this isn't the best place when the base skill is still a wip
Posted on 06 January 2015, 04:45 by:   朘膣交    PM
Score +20
well...what can i say?
Posted on 06 January 2015, 20:38 by:   mirageot    PM
Score -17
This is still a draft, as I plan to fix it good one day. Also realise, this is all done on my little 3DS screen, that is why doing backgrounds and body panels is very limited for me. I planto change or add more panels in the future.
Mirage
Posted on 08 January 2015, 19:34 by:   vrba79    PM
Score +51
This particular artist throws a huge whine fest/self-pity party at another website he hosts these at, anytime someone offers even constructive criticism. Going so far as to ask the moderators there to silence his critics. Apparently folks telling him that he needs to improve his anatomy, and attempt different perspectives is too much for him. If said site wasn't so starved for new content, they'd probably tell him to take his crap elsewhere. I'm honestly surprised he hasn't flipped the fuck out here, considering the tepid response he's getting here. But all of his comics are the same melodramatic, poorly-written shit in a different ugly wrapper.
Posted on 09 January 2015, 15:49 by:   mirageot    PM
Score -29
Oh, look, one of the trolls from the other site that the admins told them to shut the fuck up and stop spamming the other site.

vrba79, get's angry at me, as his little friends, because I get lots of more views, than him and such. But vrba79 just proved that how my art and stories do get reconaise on the net, as being unique. Out of thousands of comics posted here, he found this story and knew immediately who I was. Thank you!

Like I told everyone at the other site, If you can do better than me, do it! Nothing is stopping you. I also encourage people to always post their stories and art, as I am always happy seeing other's people works.

Mirage
Last edited on 09 January 2015, 18:15.
Posted on 09 January 2015, 21:14 by:   vrba79    PM
Score +52
Actually, here's a good cross section of people critiquing you, you being a whiny little bitch, and then the admin calling you out on being the main antagonist.
You were even lashing out at the people who were going in-depth to explain how you could improve. That's not the calling card of an artist, that's a drama queen.
http://fembotcentral.com/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=12278&start=20
Posted on 10 January 2015, 01:13 by:   mirageot    PM
Score -30
vrba79, you are not even worth it. And those peoples (same as always... same old trolls as before), are the few that bitches all the time against me. Should I post also that I am the one who get some of the most views in the entire site too? Show that I also get thousands of views, every time I post a comic or story there, unlike you. Lots of other people actually do enjoy my art and stories, and that simply kills you and the trolls.

Like I said at the other site, if you don't like my stuff, simply move on and let the one who enjoys it, enjoy it.

If you can't do that, go seek some mental help. It's just a comic...

Mirage
Last edited on 10 January 2015, 01:33.
Posted on 10 January 2015, 04:57 by:   vrba79    PM
Score +13
Define "lots".
Posted on 17 January 2015, 06:18 by:   Etic    PM
Score +67
Comics are visual. Use less text. Don't tell us when you can show us.
Posted on 18 January 2015, 06:52 by:   Savvic    PM
Score +34
Have you considered putting all the text onto single dedicated panes and all the art onto their own pages? There's a lot of close up shots at faces and some of mouths talking which the energy and time could have been concentrated some other more rewarding place.
Posted on 18 January 2015, 07:07 by:   mirageot    PM
Score -25
I will add more body shots for sure, in the future, when I'll fix it (it's still in draft). I will also add more panels and pages, with very little text. Thank you for all the input, everyone. This comic is slowly reaching it's end. I'll try to keep it under 100 pages.
Posted on 28 January 2015, 10:57 by:   Michael8712    PM
Score -8
Story is touching art keep at it man don't let others discourage you. I know myself i cant draw worth a damn but i do see alot of potential for this. Just keep going man you'll do great if you keep working at it.

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